Freedoms Chords

Who would lend their essence to such words
Uncrumple them ‘midst fading sense of truth
Sharpen dull edgeless rusting swords.

Shouted once from blood stained creaking boards
Muttered by those grown “long in the tooth”
Who would lend their essence to such words

Whisper calls from echoless fjords
Spur the interest of our failing youth
Sharpen dull edgeless rusting swords

Challenge them to run - not from - but toward
A passion that would brand them as uncouth
Who would lend their essence to such words

Reweave them as a fire, incite the hoards
Nurture the subtleties taking root
Sharpen dull edgeless rusting swords

Re-sound the growing call of freedom’s chords
Deny the tyrants reign of spurs and boots
Who would lend their essence to such words
Sharpen dull edgeless rusting swords.


©2/26/2022

AN ORIGINAL VILLANELLE CONTEST 
Sponsor – L Milton Hankins

Copyright © | Year Posted 2022



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Date: 3/4/2022 1:00:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. A wonderful write. Have a blessed day/weekend writing away.......................
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Date: 3/4/2022 9:51:00 AM
Marvelous and elegant John with so many lines that "re-sound" with eloquence. Congratulations on your win. May blessing resound for you.
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Date: 3/4/2022 1:12:00 AM
Congrats! Thanks for sharing this. God bless you.
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Date: 3/3/2022 5:25:00 PM
Back to congratulate you on your placement in the contest. :)Paulette
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Date: 3/3/2022 4:25:00 PM
A really fine Villanelle, John. Congratulations. I'm glad it rose to a fine position on placement list.
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Date: 3/3/2022 4:25:00 PM
beautiful and profound , john. Congrats for your well deserved win in the contest
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Date: 2/27/2022 5:27:00 PM
Awesome write, John... Much food for thought here. ~ Busy Digesting
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Date: 2/27/2022 3:32:00 PM
Started out wonderfully penned, and ended with a flourish! "Re-sound the growing call of freedom’s chords Deny the tyrants reign of spurs and boots Who would lend their essence to such words Sharpen dull edgeless rusting swords. " Wow!
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Date: 2/27/2022 9:19:00 AM
A brilliant first place winner, your poem for freedom. Fjord, wow. ...They must strike before the ice melts and becomes slush...and so they did! Good luck in the contest! I Am Anaya
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I Am Anaya
Date: 2/28/2022 8:07:00 AM
Right TROPHY! I'm new I forgot about the Trophy.
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John Lawless
Date: 2/27/2022 1:43:00 PM
I'll taketh first place trophy and be off....appreciate your kind comment...
Date: 2/27/2022 6:39:00 AM
A poignant Villanelle resonating the harsh reality of the wrath of war. Good Luck in the contest~I know it will rank tops! :)Paulette
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John Lawless
Date: 2/27/2022 1:42:00 PM
Thanks Paulette, I avoid the Villanelle form at all costs but just had to take Milton up on this contest. It is a muse maddening ordeal.
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