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Freedom of Movement

cool green leaves rustling
hot red tin roof expanding-
freedom of movement
stiff arthritic limbs longing
go - exercise caution - stop
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Romios Avatar
August 18, 2019 at 2:32 PM
Arthritic limbs, indeed. Those are most painful Panagiota
Toney Avatar
August 18, 2019 at 8:07 PM
Very true, Panagiota. Thanks for stopping by. ~Mark
Faulkner Avatar
August 17, 2019 at 3:05 PM
I see an old house 'settling' for the night, very descriptive, Mark!
Toney Avatar
August 17, 2019 at 9:41 PM
Why, thank you, Michelle! I like that thought :) ~Mark
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