Freedom of Movement

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cool green leaves rustling hot red tin roof expanding- freedom of movement stiff arthritic limbs longing go - exercise caution - stop

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Panagiota Romios

Date: 8/18/2019 2:32:00 PM

Arthritic limbs, indeed. Those are most painful Panagiota

Mark Toney
Date: 8/18/2019 8:07:00 PM

Very true, Panagiota. Thanks for stopping by. ~Mark

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 8/17/2019 3:05:00 PM

I see an old house 'settling' for the night, very descriptive, Mark!

Mark Toney
Date: 8/17/2019 9:41:00 PM

Why, thank you, Michelle! I like that thought :) ~Mark