Freedom of Choice

(revised Oct 13, 2025)

home base for lonely hearts
understanding for those willing to be taught.
Christ is Lord.

masterplan for a mind
settled on selfless, godly, righteous, lawful thought
choices bind

blueprint for the soul
freedom of choice for those who have long sought
that first step

proposal for spirits
love, joy, peace, patience, pardon - Jesus’ blood has bought
grace frees us
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Dietrich Avatar
September 17, 2024 at 3:59 PM
I hope this got a win. You wrote it very well
Dietrich Avatar
September 20, 2024 at 7:16 AM
I don't think any of mine ever placed. Weird since I do them correctly and have seen winners not done correctly. It is what it is. Yours is great
Poteet Avatar
September 19, 2024 at 10:34 AM
Actually my entry was very different and it would NOT have placed; so as I often do, I revised it. I'm glad for the supportive comment on my revision - thanks, Andrea. PS: Revision didn't place either.
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