Freedom For Tree-Doms

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We often find a shade under a tree, but sometimes it is the trees that seek a shade under our hands. 

In the shade of our hands great trees rest
And in the midst of our circle many forests hide 
Seeking relief from scorching greed
And the strong foul winds of menacing commerce.
Thickly they grow nourished by storms,
The storms of our words and deeds
That night and day stand with them.

The sweet birds sing to them 
About an old tree now long gone 
That one day woke to the terrors of a blade. 
Valiantly did she stand her ground
Defending her right to be a tree for a while:
Not sawdust, not plywood, not firewood--
Just a happy green tree for a good while.
"Freedom for Tree-doms!" she cried out that day 
To rouse trees and men alike
Against the terror of the cold steel blade.

But not a man, not a tree, rushed to her side
So alone she stood to fight her battle.
Alas, all she had for missiles were her pretty leaves,
Which in vain she hurled with a swing of her boughs
To drive the harsh blade from her mighty limbs.

Above the forest a little bird watched her struggle 
end
As with flailing boughs she drowned
In the sea of green below
To lie quiet on the forest floor.
On her soft fallen leaves that night 
Poachers crept while the world slept 
And bore her away to humming mills
In a town far from the birds that wept.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 4/26/2017 4:59:00 AM
If you listen you can hear the trees speak and you can hear them weep when injured or cut down. Your poem is most beautiful Agona! Congratulations on having it featured. 7 ; ) Aloha, Connie
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Agona Apell
Date: 5/8/2017 6:02:00 AM
Delighted to see you drop in, Connie! The trees indeed have voice and tears, perceptible to minds that care. Thanks for the 7!
Date: 4/25/2017 6:51:00 AM
VERY EDUCATIVE THE POEM IS TEACHING US NOT TO CUT DOWN TREES TEACHES US TO PLANT TREES VERY BEAUTIFULLY WRITTEN
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Agona Apell
Date: 5/8/2017 6:15:00 AM
Thanks Abdul! The tress stand with us in the battle to make our world eternally beautiful
Date: 2/16/2016 7:48:00 PM
Amazing and well penned, Agona, it's a deep write... LINDA
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Agona Apell
Date: 2/18/2016 8:29:00 AM
Thanks Linda!
Date: 11/7/2015 8:30:00 PM
amazing imagery, deep write. SKAT
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Agona Apell
Date: 11/8/2015 3:46:00 AM
SKAT, it's good to see you drop in. Thanks for the compliment!
Date: 11/7/2015 8:01:00 PM
wow, this had such great imagery. I really enjoyed this poem showing such compassion for our wonderful trees.
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Agona Apell
Date: 11/8/2015 3:43:00 AM
Thanks Andrea! The trees are one of us.
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