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Freedom

A chana orientalis kept in my chamber's light trapped in a pot throughout the night intermittently leaped and splashed seeking escape from its limited chance in the pot half filled with water covered with a bowel's soft round. In the morning next day the fish freed from the watery bed released in the wide courtyard tank where it swimed with newfound pride Wih greater freedom it darted and swirled a metaphor of liberation's art where boundaries break and spirits restart. It's movement spoke a passionate plea a celebration of being freed no longer confined by the narrow walls now swimming with unbridled delight.

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Date: 1/6/2025 3:10:00 PM
Hello~ what an ubusyal poem Akham! My favorite lines are the last four, bring a Pisces, myself.. those words ,,the celebration of being freed” express the theme of my lufe. Always finding people to make me wrong or how I think and they won’t leave me alone.. well they do when they cut me off from their friendship, yes. Such self-righteous monster.s, in a sense, to be free academically is the best freedom of all. And not being a follower nor under the control of others.. Pabgie xx
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