Freedom

I watch them fight, taking a stand, all they want, is a free land. Keeping them quiet, a country in chains, these young people, have freedom to gain.

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Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 11/18/2009 6:08:00 PM

Nice sentiments in this poem, Christy.Blessings.D.

Ronald Bingham

Date: 7/9/2009 7:46:00 PM

Just checking in, hope all is well. God Bless. Ron

Mary Duhart

Date: 7/5/2009 5:58:00 AM

Yes they do and we all have freedom to gain. both naturally and spiritually as well. Great write and thank you for commenting on my work also. May your day be blessed also.

Date: 6/25/2009 12:12:00 PM

So much to think about in this poem. You asked about getting a copy of On Butterfly Wings. If you didn't preorder one, the information in Sharon Weimer's latest blog posted here from Crystal. You'll love it! Karen

Ronald Bingham

Date: 6/21/2009 1:13:00 PM

The old U.S. of A. is still a beacon in the dark. Most countries don't really hate us they are only envious of the lifestyle we have, and don't know how to obtain it. We all need to pray that God shows them the road to freedom through our Savior Jesus Christ. God Bless you Christy know you are always in our prayers. Ron

James Fraser

Date: 6/21/2009 7:57:00 AM

We all should be free Christy, and rightly so. Nice poem>>James

Rebecca Pasco

Date: 6/21/2009 6:19:00 AM

Hell yeah!And i plan on joining the fight.HOOAH!! great poem!

James Marshall Goff

Date: 6/21/2009 5:55:00 AM

yes, as so many similar scenes before flash thru my mind, well spoken, Christy, jim