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Freedom

a kid doesn’t know freedom - toppling a lid, sneaking a cookie delights

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/19/2023 8:08:00 AM

Yes, explaining that to a child is not very easy. Boundaries and borders help them to build up a concept of some things we don't do. Thanks for sharing this one with us. Sara

Gershon Wolf

Date: 8/17/2023 7:31:00 PM

Ha, ha! Could even lead to 'jail' - or a time-out...

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/17/2023 8:16:00 PM

Don’t worry! They’ll get paroled..lol

Bill Baker

Date: 8/17/2023 5:21:00 PM

Fun read and nice poetry, Kim. Smiles ~ Blessings Bill

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/17/2023 8:16:00 PM

Thank you, Bill!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/17/2023 2:28:00 PM

He seems fairly free to be naughty. Haha. Cute one

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/17/2023 5:02:00 PM

LOL…yes!

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 8/17/2023 9:15:00 AM

A fun write. I enjoyed it. Now can I have a cookie??? Oh please just one??? Have a great day.............

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/17/2023 10:04:00 AM

Yes! More than one! Why not ~ Cookie Monster (Me) ;)

Joe Dimino

Date: 8/17/2023 7:51:00 AM

Oh to go back! From the eyes of a child. Interesting snack.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/17/2023 10:05:00 AM

I can “sneak one” now anytime I want…lol

Joseph May

Date: 8/17/2023 6:45:00 AM

Freeing the cookie from the jar!, Nicely penned Kim

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/17/2023 10:05:00 AM

Thanks, Joe!

Lin Lane

Date: 8/17/2023 6:18:00 AM

Hi Kim. One of the freedoms of adulthood is not having to sneak that cookie, or a few. Loved your Monoku.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/17/2023 10:05:00 AM

We feel like we do when eyes are on us…still taking it…lol