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Freedom

a kid doesn’t know freedom - toppling a lid, sneaking a cookie delights

Copyright © Kim Rodrigues | Year Posted 2023

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August 19, 2023 at 8:08 AM

Yes, explaining that to a child is not very easy. Boundaries and borders help them to build up a concept of some things we don't do. Thanks for sharing this one with us. Sara

August 17, 2023 at 7:31 PM

Ha, ha! Could even lead to 'jail' - or a time-out...

August 17, 2023 at 8:16 PM

Don’t worry! They’ll get paroled..lol

August 17, 2023 at 5:21 PM

Fun read and nice poetry, Kim. Smiles ~ Blessings Bill

August 17, 2023 at 8:16 PM

Thank you, Bill!

Andrea Dietrich

August 17, 2023 at 2:28 PM

He seems fairly free to be naughty. Haha. Cute one

August 17, 2023 at 5:02 PM

LOL…yes!

Paula Goldsmith

August 17, 2023 at 9:15 AM

A fun write. I enjoyed it. Now can I have a cookie??? Oh please just one??? Have a great day.............

August 17, 2023 at 10:04 AM

Yes! More than one! Why not ~ Cookie Monster (Me) ;)

Joseph P. DiMino

August 17, 2023 at 7:51 AM

Oh to go back! From the eyes of a child. Interesting snack.

August 17, 2023 at 10:05 AM

I can “sneak one” now anytime I want…lol

August 17, 2023 at 6:45 AM

Freeing the cookie from the jar!, Nicely penned Kim

August 17, 2023 at 10:05 AM

Thanks, Joe!

August 17, 2023 at 6:18 AM

Hi Kim. One of the freedoms of adulthood is not having to sneak that cookie, or a few. Loved your Monoku.

August 17, 2023 at 10:05 AM

We feel like we do when eyes are on us…still taking it…lol

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