Premiere Contest WinnerFreedom

Freedom for our ancestors did not come silently.
It came like firecracker pops. It came with canons’ blast.
It came with rebel shouts that shook the world.
It came with many sacrifices in the past.

Freedom echoes in our nation’s collective memory.
We celebrate it noisily in July.
But think beyond the revelry and cacophony.
Think beyond the many lights that blaze the sky.

Freedom’s fight must never be forgotten.
Its story must be passed on to not be lost.
Revolt was loud. It sparked a fire led by a battle cry.
Brave souls’ lives were precious freedom’s cost. 

March 21, 2022
For Robert James Liguori's Freedom Poetry Contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Gregory Avatar
May 26, 2022 at 6:03 PM
a true sound out, accolade on the ones responsible to erase suppression.
Calasibetta Avatar
March 29, 2022 at 2:24 PM
Congratulations on your win in the contest. Your poem truly a passionate tribute to the sacrifices made for us. We the people who need to carry that torch for freedom. :)Paulette
Daniel Avatar
March 28, 2022 at 7:06 AM
True, many people sacrificed themselves to get us freedom, congratulations, Andrea:)
Seeker Avatar
March 27, 2022 at 9:34 PM
Fiery patriotism indeed! So happy to have come across this powerful write, a contest winner too, I see, congrats Andrea!
Baker Avatar
March 24, 2022 at 5:29 PM
Congrats on the win and a fine poem, Andrea. Smiles and Blessings, wrapped in personal freedom for all, Bill
Maverick Avatar
March 24, 2022 at 1:20 AM
Indeed it so happened..' Holding onto freedom Is as hard as winning it though.) We watch Ukraine not really sure of who's the bad guy.? Maybe there are many.? Zelensky I beleive was Paid 100s of millions so he must be a multi-millionare.? by Scoros to push the Lgbtq..? Situation.) (unless what I saw was wrong?) Putin is a Multi-billionaire.. A former Scoros protege So who knows..? But there will be some suckers Cheering on whoever they're told is good..) Me I've given up listening..' Yours truly I'm No longer being made a fool of..' Like in the Past..'
Agustin Avatar
March 23, 2022 at 9:24 PM
Congrats! Thanks so much for sharing this. God bless you.
DiMino Avatar
March 23, 2022 at 3:59 AM
I join you in prayer for Ukraine's emancipation. Inspiring write! Congratulations!
Brown Avatar
March 22, 2022 at 6:37 PM
Congratulations on your win. Outstanding poem. Blessings ~ Debra
Lawrence Avatar
March 22, 2022 at 1:58 PM
Powerful poignant words delivered beautifully Andrea. You have a gift for storytelling. Brave Souls celebrated forever . Congratulations on your trophy win ! Hugs, Susan :)
Goldsmith Avatar
March 22, 2022 at 12:13 PM
Congratulations on your win. Your "Freedom" is a lovely write. Love your line, "Brave souls’ lives were precious freedom’s cost." Have a great/blessed day................
Roper Avatar
March 22, 2022 at 9:26 AM
Very celebrated write, Andrea, congratulations on your win.
Marcum Wong Avatar
March 22, 2022 at 9:04 AM
This is great in every aspect Andrea, and so worthy of your Trophy! Your last line wraps our freedoms up so well. Outstanding! Congratulations on your wonderful win. Blessings xxoo
Ray Choudhury Avatar
March 22, 2022 at 5:53 AM
Congratulations on your trophy win - a brilliant poem in rhymes. Freedom is precious for individuals, for nations. Warm wishes ~ Mala
Miller Avatar
March 22, 2022 at 2:20 AM
An excellent poem, good luck in the contest.
Alex Avatar
March 22, 2022 at 1:45 AM
Every nation or nationals who have been under slavery know the preciousness of freedom. Own countrymen enslaving others is another story. Plenty to ponder in your poem. Congratulations!
Edmonds  Avatar
March 21, 2022 at 7:28 PM
Freedom is a wonderful thing, never to be forgotten is how it came to be. Superb poetry Andrea… Belle
Brown Avatar
March 21, 2022 at 5:36 PM
Hi, Andrea, excellent writing. The history of this land should never be forgotten or destroyed. It should be preserved forever. enjoyed Blessings ~ Debra
Leffanta Avatar
March 21, 2022 at 11:41 AM
If only it were about freedom rather than money and power! Aloha!
Cunningham Avatar
March 21, 2022 at 11:27 AM
We must never forget the brave servicemen and women that have died for our freedom, it always comes at a price. Tom
Poet Avatar
March 21, 2022 at 11:01 AM
I really like the thoughts provoked here and the symbolism in this masterpiece. Andrea, your wording is just great. Have a wonderful Monday. And good luck in the contest
One Avatar
March 21, 2022 at 10:09 AM
I wonder if there is any such thing as freedom..people keep stealing land, then claiming it is there...and it is like vicious circle.. all wars are man made, which makes a mockery of freedom and democracy... a thought provoking piece..
Romios Avatar
March 21, 2022 at 8:56 AM
Right on, Andrea.. Currently, we have a nation giving our rights awAy with glee, Great write Pangie
Hankins Avatar
March 21, 2022 at 8:35 AM
This is a beautiful write, Andrea. Every word of it resonates in the heart of this veteran. Best of luck in the contest.
Bayles Avatar
March 21, 2022 at 7:42 AM
Andrea, a good look at freedom. Thanks for posting.
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