Freedom

Escape the madness ..
Mind is filled with chaos..
A battle of one's fear..
Trapped in yesterday..
Mourning the ghosts of the past..
A lingering entrapment..
Darkness and sadness had awakened..

Masquerading as the only way..
As yesterday haunts the chaotic mind..
Madness explodes in an overall release..
The chains of entrapment broken..

Fragments of the dark night of the soul evaporates..
Darkness escapes..
As cries had been silenced..
Eyes sting no more from tears..

Instead the tears reflect rejuvenation..
Had fell..
Now there is freedom..

As the sun rises..
I rise along the sun..
Had risen..
I am free..

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Date: 9/25/2019 8:03:00 AM
A deep roil of emotions felt here, my dear friend. As you rise with the sun you experience freedom from torments and the elation of rejuvenation.. how beautifully you expressed it and how wondrous that must be, Robertina. Your artistic passion inspirited your dark to light imagery to rise and captivate my heart and imagination in your amazing write. A fav! Inspiring poetry. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan
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Robertina B.
Date: 10/1/2019 4:54:00 PM
Thank you so much for your amazing feedback, dear Susan.. Receiving your sweet message really made my day extra special, my friend.. Thank you for your wonderful support!! Many blessings.
Date: 9/8/2019 1:01:00 PM
To unshackle the mind from rooted and shaking thoughts.. to unchain the heart from its wounds and pains.. a soul is set free! Now our craving is for the "HOW"! A beautiful poetry that depicts the soul torment and pondering.. Regards and blessings, dear Robertina.
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Date: 9/12/2019 2:49:00 PM
Thank you so much for your lovely words, dear Besma.. I am honored and humbled by your visit.. Many blessings to you, my sweet friend!
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