Free Verse On Love

Two circles linked within our hearts
Each a symbol chained in the orbital path
Of our love's infinite pathway
Forever to return united in the moment
As east is to west
And north is to south
As wind is to stillness
As fire is to water
As earth is to air
I am vulnerable
I am centered in your essence
To inherit your elements
From beginning to end with every molecule
I am empty to be filled
And filled to be empty
I am complete



November 13. 2019
Writing Challenge, November - Some Kind of Love - Poetry Contest
Sponsor by:  Dear Heart - Wiishkobi Ode

Revised February 26, 2020

Free Verse on Love Poetry Contest
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Dutta Avatar
February 5, 2020 at 11:56 PM
WOW! I like the lines ' I am empty to be filled and filled to be empty I am complete.'
Blodgett Avatar
February 6, 2020 at 1:58 PM
Thank you Anisha for your kind comment. Much appreciated. Lonna
Roper Avatar
November 19, 2019 at 10:22 PM
Many congratulations on your winning placement:-) hugs eve
Blodgett Avatar
November 21, 2019 at 10:59 PM
Thanks Eve for the warm hugs! Lonna
Chiri Avatar
November 18, 2019 at 9:19 PM
Congratulations on your placement!;)
Blodgett Avatar
November 19, 2019 at 10:30 AM
Thank you Brenda! Lonna
La France Avatar
November 18, 2019 at 4:38 PM
Lonna, congratulations on your win in my writing challenge with this wonderful creative write !
Blodgett Avatar
November 18, 2019 at 5:48 PM
Thank you so very much. Love your contests and your writes. Lonna
Andresen Avatar
November 18, 2019 at 1:56 PM
- Congratulations on a great 3rd place in the contest, Lonna :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Blodgett Avatar
November 18, 2019 at 3:07 PM
You always bring me a smile! Lonna
Somadas Avatar
November 13, 2019 at 11:15 PM
The words are dancing with the pen of love.. Congrats..
Blodgett Avatar
November 16, 2019 at 9:18 PM
Thank you Jenish! Lonna
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November 13, 2019 at 10:41 PM
i am vulnerable i am centered in your essence to inherit your elements, my fav parts... great write. Ann
Blodgett Avatar
November 16, 2019 at 12:33 PM
Thank you for your most positive comments. Lonna
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