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Two circles linked within our hearts Each a symbol chained in the orbital path Of our love's infinite pathway Forever to return united in the moment As east is to west And north is to south As wind is to stillness As fire is to water As earth is to air I am vulnerable I am centered in your essence To inherit your elements From beginning to end with every molecule I am empty to be filled And filled to be empty I am complete November 13. 2019 Writing Challenge, November - Some Kind of Love - Poetry Contest Sponsor by: Dear Heart - Wiishkobi Ode Revised February 26, 2020 Free Verse on Love Poetry Contest

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Date: 2/5/2020 11:56:00 PM
WOW! I like the lines ' I am empty to be filled and filled to be empty I am complete.'
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Lonna Blodgett
Date: 2/6/2020 1:58:00 PM
Thank you Anisha for your kind comment. Much appreciated. Lonna
Date: 11/19/2019 10:22:00 PM
Many congratulations on your winning placement:-) hugs eve
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Lonna Blodgett
Date: 11/21/2019 10:59:00 PM
Thanks Eve for the warm hugs! Lonna
Date: 11/18/2019 9:19:00 PM
Congratulations on your placement!;)
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Lonna Blodgett
Date: 11/19/2019 10:30:00 AM
Thank you Brenda! Lonna
Date: 11/18/2019 4:38:00 PM
Lonna, congratulations on your win in my writing challenge with this wonderful creative write !
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Lonna Blodgett
Date: 11/18/2019 5:48:00 PM
Thank you so very much. Love your contests and your writes. Lonna
Date: 11/18/2019 1:56:00 PM
- Congratulations on a great 3rd place in the contest, Lonna :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Lonna Blodgett
Date: 11/18/2019 3:07:00 PM
You always bring me a smile! Lonna
Date: 11/13/2019 11:15:00 PM
The words are dancing with the pen of love.. Congrats..
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Lonna Blodgett
Date: 11/16/2019 9:18:00 PM
Thank you Jenish! Lonna
Date: 11/13/2019 10:41:00 PM
i am vulnerable i am centered in your essence to inherit your elements, my fav parts... great write. Ann
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Lonna Blodgett
Date: 11/16/2019 12:33:00 PM
Thank you for your most positive comments. Lonna

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