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Free Verse On Love

somber seems the heavens when compared to the illumination we bring they say the heavens hide from the brilliance of our love I say they do not they ignite shining brighter from the splendor of it new stars and galaxies are born as the sun grows more fevered from the magnitude of our heat our love transcends all the heavens rejoice from our intensity as they expand from a love never seen before, heat never before felt in any lifetime all celestial bodies celebrate the atmospheric phenomenon we give birth to by bringing a new radiance to those old stars all from a love that infects all that it touches Date:7/1/2018

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Sonia Walker

Date: 2/29/2020 12:23:00 PM

Brenda, congratulations on your poem.

Winged Warrior

Date: 2/29/2020 6:30:00 AM

(((Congrats!!))) dear sis... you are a true Poetess Bren...all my poetic love...bro bro :o)

Sam Kauffman

Date: 2/28/2020 11:23:00 PM

Congratulations on your top placement, Brenda.

Eve Roper

Date: 2/28/2020 10:00:00 PM

Brenda, love the verse. Big congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve

Constance La France

Date: 2/28/2020 9:31:00 PM

Brenda, a lovely poem and congratulations on your win in Lu's contest _Constance

Lu Loo

Date: 2/28/2020 7:00:00 PM

amazing sweet Brenda...o, that muse of yours is always beautiful...thank you for your participation and congratulations on your placement

Line Gauthier

Date: 7/5/2019 8:32:00 PM

Bravo, Brenda. Congrats on your Premiere win.

Brenda Chiri
Date: 7/5/2019 8:44:00 PM

Thank you so much Line! I do appreciate it so much!;)

Sandra Adams

Date: 7/5/2019 11:11:00 AM

This is a lovely write Brenda bound with beautiful images....congrats on your win :) hugs

Brenda Chiri
Date: 7/5/2019 2:02:00 PM

Sandra thankyou so very much! You are too kind!

Gordon Mcconnell

Date: 7/5/2019 10:54:00 AM

A lovely piece Brenda, such loving thoughts conveyed with fine imagery and making it above the stars indeed! Have a great weekend, Your friend, Gordon

Brenda Chiri
Date: 7/5/2019 2:02:00 PM

Gordon thank you so much! I am gonna have to soupmsil you so we can catch up! Like real soon!;)

Winged Warrior

Date: 7/5/2019 7:16:00 AM

That's my sissy poo poo...bro bro very very very proud...the 'transcending trio strikes again'...:o) :o)...(((nice job))) DF...bro bro

Brenda Chiri
Date: 7/5/2019 2:01:00 PM

Bro bro thank you so much! Hey I was proud too when I seen my sis and bro has won too! We killed it!;) lol! ;)

Susan Ashley

Date: 7/4/2019 10:07:00 PM

Wow! Your poem is exquisitely expressed with beautiful passion, delicate intensity and amazing artistry, my dear sis. Your ethereal and romantic imagery is so masterfully and creatively expressed. Your best poem ever and a big big fav!! You blow my somewhat sane mind.. lol! I love it, my talented twin. So glad our crazy trio made the win list! Love and hugs.. your sane sis <3

Brenda Chiri
Date: 7/5/2019 1:40:00 AM

Ah my sane sissy! Lol yep we three had it covered! Lol! How often will that happen? I bet not many! Haha! You and bro Bria's a shoe in but I hit and miss!;) thankyou my dear dister! Love Yourinsanehalf!;)

John Hamilton

Date: 7/4/2019 8:23:00 PM

You are improving by leaps and bounds Brenda, I had to leave out some impressive writes by accomplished poets because this is simply your best yet!

Brenda Chiri
Date: 7/4/2019 8:38:00 PM

Thank you so much John! You just don't know how much I appreciate your saying that! Makes me feel good about all the time I have been taking on these! Thanks so much once again and know I truly appreciate it more than words can say!;)

John Fleming

Date: 7/4/2019 8:15:00 PM

Absolutely astonishing poetry...I am sat here with my mouth hanging open. This really could be your best poem yet , Brenda -- truly flawless writing!! Lots of warm affection. :) john P.s Your creativeness has taken on a new intensity.

Brenda Chiri
Date: 7/4/2019 8:36:00 PM

Ahhh John I do believe you might be bias!;) lol! Not saying that it's a bad thing because I always love your input into my writes! Thank you ...John now close your mouth! Haha! Silly is what you are!;) All my affection

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 7/4/2019 7:51:00 PM

The transcendent reach of love! Congratulations, Brenda!

Brenda Chiri
Date: 7/4/2019 8:00:00 PM

Kim ah thank you so much! I always appreciate when you stop through!;)

J.W. Earnings

Date: 7/4/2019 6:43:00 PM

What a wonderful poem! This is so imaginative and gracious.. -JWE

Brenda Chiri
Date: 7/4/2019 8:00:00 PM

Thanks so much JW! Appreciated very much!;)

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 7/4/2019 12:10:00 PM

What a gorgeous entry for this contest Brenda! I love how it inspires our connection with the cosmos. I hope to see this a top winner! : ) xxoo

Brenda Chiri
Date: 7/4/2019 12:36:00 PM

Thank you Connie it would be nice to be a top winner! Maybe we will see each other there! One can only hope!;) I think I relate to the cosmos on just about everything lol but mostly love or beauty!;)