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why criticize when you don't even know
the pain inside I feel, I do not show
you just assume and think that it's alright
to voice opinions though they're meant to slight
why break what's left of pieces of my heart?
the wounds inflicted bleed and sting and smart!
I try to smile and bear this heavy pain
but censure makes the doubt pour down like rain
the burdens that I bear are mine alone
remember dear, I'm flesh; I'm not of stone
before you throw your words and run to play
just stop and think of what you do and say
I'm crushed; I'm hurt; I'm angry; can't you see,
For you prejudged intent, but don’t know me
Perhaps the lines I write reveal my soul
"Anonymous" will help to make me whole
I wrote of things I know of, things I've seen
Perhaps a path on which you’ve never been
So please take care when wanting to critique
The one behind the poem’s not a freak
Where would we be if great ones like Shakespeare
Could not write of the gory due to fear
What if his bawdy writes were censored too
Would world devoid of Literature please you?
So live and then let live; let poets free
To write of life and death and ecstasy
The words once penned will live and testify
Of one who lived and now in death must lie
Eileen Manassian
Copyright © Eileen Manassian | Year Posted 2017
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