Paul Callus Poet Monorhyme

Free To Meander

Unhampered by daunting perfection
Not given to much introspection
Contented with idle reflection
I wander in aimless direction. 

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Contest: Form 'M' Monorhyme
Sponsor: Broken Wings
Placed 4th
© 17th April, 2017

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Susan Ashley December 23, 2017 at 8:45 PM Paul, we all need a 'day off' once in awhile to let the mind, body, spirit relax, go with the flow and free the mind to wander... a wonderful Monorhyme that 'meanders' gently and beautifully through the readers mind.. Warmest wishes my friend.. ~Susan Paul Callus December 24, 2017 at 9:08 AM Days like these are important for us to de-stress and recharge our batteries in a relaxed mood. Thank you, Susan, for your lovely insightful comments. Warm regards // paul

Sneha Rv May 15, 2017 at 12:29 PM This is so beautiful. I love how much you can say in four lines and this is one of my favourites. Congratulations on your wonderful win! :) Paul Callus May 15, 2017 at 2:38 PM Hi Sneha!! How lovely to see you back! Both you and your poetry have been missed. Thank you for stopping by and commenting so favourably. Regards // paul

Ravi Sathasivam April 24, 2017 at 1:10 AM Excellent. Well penned and brilliant choices Enjoyed reading it. Congrats. Paul Callus April 24, 2017 at 5:00 PM I am truly encouraged by your comments, Ravi...thank you! Regards // paul

Eve Roper April 22, 2017 at 6:55 PM Back to congratulate you, Paul, nice win ~* Paul Callus April 23, 2017 at 4:00 PM Thank you, Eve. Best regards // paul

John Michaels April 22, 2017 at 3:40 AM Very nice, Paul. Great imagery and congrats on your win. Regards, John. Paul Callus April 22, 2017 at 11:03 AM Pleased that you enjoyed it, John...thank you. Regards // paul

Afolabi Muideen April 21, 2017 at 3:33 PM Congratulations on your win my friend. Paul Callus April 22, 2017 at 10:54 AM Thank you, Afolabi. Regards // paul

Anil Deo April 20, 2017 at 7:58 PM it seems yiu have a CENTER that keeps you very centered Paul, despite this Monorhyme. Well-done (#7) Paul Callus April 21, 2017 at 5:16 AM Idle moments are a luxury in this fast moving life, Anil, so most of the time we cannot afford not to be centred! Thank you for stopping by. Regards // paul

Constance La France April 20, 2017 at 2:44 PM Paul congratulations on your win in my contest with this wonderful Monorhyme. Paul Callus April 21, 2017 at 5:14 AM Thank you Constance. Irrespective of winning, I grab at the chance of any inspiration that your contests offer. Regards // paul

Maria Williams April 20, 2017 at 6:33 AM I see this is another win, so well deserved Paul, and congratulations. A 7++ Paul Callus April 20, 2017 at 10:18 AM You are too kind, Maria...thank you! Regards // paul

Chris Hagy April 19, 2017 at 7:27 PM I really like this little diddy Paul! :) I often find myself to be a little aimlessly content...usually on my day off haha! :) Paul Callus April 20, 2017 at 4:50 AM Finding some time to idle around and really take it easy does us a world of good, Chris! Thank you for a pleasant visit:) Regards // paul

Charlie Smith April 19, 2017 at 11:10 AM Had to read this twice. The first time made me dizzy. Good work and congratulations... Paul Callus April 19, 2017 at 12:33 PM Hope the dizziness has passed away by now, Charlie:) Thank you for the comments and congrats. Regards // paul

Alexis Y. April 19, 2017 at 9:26 AM Hi Paul, You did this very well. Congratulations on your fine win. It was well deserved:-) Alexis Paul Callus April 19, 2017 at 12:48 PM Thank you, Alexis. Pleased to have you visiting:) Regards // paul

Connie Marcum Wong April 18, 2017 at 8:18 PM In a dream world...as most poets can relate Paul. I hope this does well in her contest! I enjoyed it. 7 ; ) Paul Callus April 19, 2017 at 1:19 PM I compared the author to a river, aimlessly meandering, Connie. Thank you for your lovely interpretation:) Regards // paul

Andrea Dietrich April 18, 2017 at 6:25 PM I am kind of this way myself, so I REALLY like this one!!! Paul Callus April 19, 2017 at 4:21 PM Thank you for the 'like' Andrea:) Regards // paul

Eve Roper April 18, 2017 at 8:33 AM Nicely done, Paul, the verse reminds me a little of time going bye slowly but surely. ~* Paul Callus April 19, 2017 at 4:20 PM I agree with your comment, Eve! Somehow it now also reminds me of the song 'Unchained Melodies'. Hugs // paul

Anne-Lise Andresen April 18, 2017 at 4:15 AM - A beautiful poem, Paul :) - Hope you've had a lovely Easter - Best wishes in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Paul Callus April 19, 2017 at 4:03 PM Thank you, Anne-Lise:) I hope that like me you've had a lovely Easter. Hugs // paul

Lynn Marie April 18, 2017 at 1:46 AM Wonderful sentiments, expertly penned with very wise word. Excellent monorhyme Paul:) lynnxxx Paul Callus April 19, 2017 at 3:54 PM You are very kind, Lynn:) Thank you! Regards // paul

Ilene Bauer April 17, 2017 at 6:17 PM many monorhymes sound forced to me, but this one works very well, paul! i like the message and the way it flows, too... Paul Callus April 19, 2017 at 1:33 PM So pleased that you found it to your liking, Ilene:) Thank you! Regards // paul

Agnes Krampe April 17, 2017 at 6:14 PM Love it, Paul! Brilliant choices for your monorhymes. Paul Callus April 19, 2017 at 1:32 PM Thank you, Agnes. Your 'love' is appreciated. Regards // paul

Heidi Sands April 17, 2017 at 5:58 PM Nice one Paul :) Good luck in the contest. I like this. Paul Callus April 19, 2017 at 1:21 PM Thank you, Heidi. Your 'good luck' had the desired effect:) Regards // paul

Nette Onclaud April 17, 2017 at 5:31 PM to go with the flow even if it's ennui.. a beauty, paul,,,huggs Paul Callus April 19, 2017 at 12:07 PM Thank you, Nette. Hope you 've had a lovely Easter:) Hugs // paul

Chris Green April 17, 2017 at 4:29 PM Really nicely done Paul. Good luck in the contest. Paul Callus April 19, 2017 at 3:20 AM Thank you, Chris. Have a nice day. // paul

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart April 17, 2017 at 4:17 PM Nice :) Paul Callus April 18, 2017 at 3:19 PM Thank you, Maureen. Regards // paul