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Free Reign

I’m with family;
we’re younger, vibrant, laughing; 
through another door,
I run to a lover’s arms. . . 
free reign in Time’s passageways

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Harry Horsman

September 2, 2012 at 3:23 AM

Wow, your sophistication sure show through here,

Carol Sunshine Brown

February 25, 2011 at 10:43 AM

Congratulations on your well deserved win in Michael's contest Andrea. Love, Carol

Michael J. Falotico

February 23, 2011 at 1:55 PM

Congrats Andrea on your win in my contest... thank you for you

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

February 23, 2011 at 1:50 AM

Hi sweetie :) coming back to this unique tanka of yours :) Congrats on your win :) hugs to you :)

Kash Poet

February 22, 2011 at 10:54 AM

Hmm...it leaves me ponder...Congrats Andrea on your another win---my dream failed-----kash.

Wilma Neels

February 22, 2011 at 10:45 AM

Hey Andrea, congratulations on your awesome win in MJF's contest, love Wilma

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

February 22, 2011 at 9:18 AM

Congrats Andrea on your super win in the Dream Tanka contest with another amazing write luv.. enjoy your top ten win with luv..

John Freeman

February 22, 2011 at 8:14 AM

Good to see you in the top 10 again Andrea. Congratulations on your poem's honored seventh place. Agape, Moses

Nette Onclaud

February 22, 2011 at 7:49 AM

oh andrea... sweetness refined! congrats on the happy win.:) huggs, nette

Robert Pettit

February 21, 2011 at 11:59 PM

This was nice enough to win in Michael's contest. Congratulations.

Audrey Haick

February 21, 2011 at 10:09 PM

Congratulations on your very fine win in the contest, Andrea. It's a beautful dream! Always, Annalise

Tahera Mannan

February 21, 2011 at 8:43 PM

Beautiful Andrea. Many congratulations my dear friend.

Dr.Ram Mehta

February 21, 2011 at 5:46 PM

Congratulations on this win in the contest of Michael, Andrea

Caryl Muzzey

February 21, 2011 at 5:20 PM

Congratulations on your seventh place win, I enjoyed the read. Caryl

Sara Kendrick

February 21, 2011 at 4:23 PM

Congratulations on your win..Sara

Joyce Johnson

February 21, 2011 at 3:45 PM

I liked this lighthearted write. Congratulations Andrea. Love, Joyce

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

February 20, 2011 at 12:50 AM

btw I looked for that photo--sorry can't be of any help to you on that front...:(

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

February 20, 2011 at 12:47 AM

I think your interpretation of the photo is wonderful, Andrea-- could very well mean that her wings aren't visible to humans-- I think that element lends to that mysterious air to your rhyme :) & yup I am too whacked! haha yikes! I need to leave :( oh boohoo ...crossing my fingers it doesn't get filled up-- super nice catching you here sweetie -- hope to see you later btw will reply to email later :) hugs to you :)

Poet Destroyer A

February 14, 2011 at 4:56 PM

awesome Tanka, Andrea,, good luck in the contest.. take care,.. And have your self a happy Valentine Day,..p.d.

T.A. Skyles-Theoklapoet

February 14, 2011 at 2:00 PM

Very good tanka I'm not real good on forms but I like this one.Thanks Andrea for the comment.~LUV~Teresa

Matthew Anish

February 14, 2011 at 12:30 PM

"Time is the stream I go fishing in" - Pythagoras. Fine Tanka! I live in NYC. What state are you in? Peace & Love Matthew Anish

Gert W. Knop

February 14, 2011 at 5:56 AM

What a nice dream you have penned here, Andrea! Enjoyed the read today afternoon. Thank you for all you kind comments and best of luck in the contest! Have a great VALENTINE's...Love, Gert