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Free My Mind

Free My Mind My Mind tells me no more My Mind tells me one more time My Mind tells me I'm smarter then this My Mind tells me no one will even know if i do My Mind tells me the kids are more important My Mind tells me the children are better of without me My Mind tells me to burn all bridges of people that are like me My Mind tells me there my friends and I can control me around there Active ways My Mind tells me you will never stop if you don't keep trying to be completely without "it" My Mind tells me there is a happy medium of my life style and that I can be like everyone else with control My Mind tells me lies My intelligence tells me that I need to keep fighting this illness know as Addiction and never give up. Jugs

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Date: 2/27/2017 1:47:00 AM
I like the way you build up your poem, with very short lines at first up until that very long revealing last line. What Doug already said, don't give up. Welcome to Poetry Soup. Now concerning your comment to your own poem :) PoetrySoup is a community. Which means that people need to know you're here before they will start reading and commenting on your poems. (Continuing in next reply)
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Darren White
Date: 2/27/2017 1:49:00 AM
The best way to do that, is by reading their poems, and leave a comment on those poems. If you do that, people will notice you're here, and they will start reading your poems, and commenting too. Good luck, and again: welcome :)
Date: 2/26/2017 9:51:00 PM
Don't give up. Yes, the mind will play any number of tricks on itself.
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Date: 2/26/2017 9:37:00 PM
A poets thoughts would be nice?
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