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Free Lebanon Today

F	Fight to win a just and equal deal
R	Rights demand today, and do not kneel!
E	Equal in demand for means to live
E	Equal in demand that leaders give

L	Liberty to seek and speak the truth
E	Energy to fight all the uncouth
B	Bastions of belief that change will come
A	Adamance for all to gain not some
N	Nation first, and not a party’s greed
O	Onslaught in the streets of those in need
N	Narrative of choice is Freedom’s voice

T	Time, a witness of the people’s pain
O	Objects of the ones who pocket gain
D	Duty sold for bribes of highest price
A	Actor-leaders play with lives like dice
Y	Young and old! Bring back the Golden Age

Eileen Manassian
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Hind Avatar
August 1, 2024 at 12:36 PM
Right on! :)
Situation Avatar
July 31, 2023 at 5:53 PM
Loved the rhyming and the intention. But the vote is the best invention. Not by power not by might but by words will God win the fight. Rights are suppressed by the unknown by birth, sex, Those on a throne. Hold to power is what they do. One day old age will say their through. Thanks for the attention!
Kaufman Avatar
July 16, 2021 at 10:52 AM
we need more powerful voices like yours, you poet activist you, well done.
Callus Avatar
December 13, 2020 at 2:17 AM
Stopping by to reread this expressive poem and to thank you for you lovely visit today. Take care...love & hugs from us all at home // paul
Carroll Avatar
December 4, 2020 at 8:24 PM
Powerful statement in today’s world.. Nicely penned! :)
Lamoureux Avatar
November 24, 2020 at 6:44 AM
Good morning Eileen. Thanks for your visit. Hugs Rick.
Lamoureux Avatar
November 13, 2020 at 6:58 AM
In light of current events this is even more powerful. Hugs Rick.
Horsman Avatar
October 22, 2020 at 1:45 AM
Wonderful mission statement, needs to be seen and read, by all. Eileen. hope you are ok, and safe, after the terrible explosion.
Lamoureux Avatar
October 13, 2020 at 7:18 AM
Dropping by with a hi and a hug. ;0)
Lamoureux Avatar
September 11, 2020 at 6:14 AM
Thanks for the visit. Hugs Rick.
Inman Avatar
September 6, 2020 at 7:40 PM
A strong write Eileen. With the recent events in Beirut it is you I worry about. I hope you are well.
Lamoureux Avatar
September 1, 2020 at 6:01 AM
Another Hi and hug.:0)
Mchattie Avatar
August 21, 2020 at 7:49 PM
It's a sad fact of life that we all at some point in time have to fight for our freedom. I hope the Lebanese people rise up and defeat those forces that keep it in ruins. Have a great day my friend.
Lamoureux Avatar
September 1, 2020 at 5:59 AM
Amen.
Wolf Avatar
July 25, 2020 at 10:22 PM
I remember when Lebanon was the 'Switzerland of the Middle East.'... Too bad Lebanon didn't do to Arafat's men what King Hussein of Jordan did. History may recall it as a bloodbath in the Jordan River, but King Hussein saved his country from ruination. Regardless of all the 'globalism' cries from youth --- and it was ever aye --- there is a point to defending one's country and keeping the terrorists and lowlifes at bay! Love your message! Happy Sunday to you. Joy and Light, Gershon
Koplin Avatar
July 24, 2020 at 12:45 PM
It's sad there is such turmoil in today's world. Great job!
Ekechukwu Avatar
July 19, 2020 at 11:55 AM
Its good to have freedom dear. You made use of a vivid imagery. Kudos
Lamoureux Avatar
July 10, 2020 at 9:15 AM
Dropping by with a hi and a hug.
Mcconnell Avatar
July 4, 2020 at 2:07 PM
Such a beautiful acrostic Eileen, great imagery throughout with a heart for your birth land. Have a blessed day, Gordon
Dietrich Avatar
June 24, 2020 at 6:20 PM
yes, I recall as a youth reading about Lebanon in the bible and then learning of it in geography class and it was my favorite of the mideastern places I read about.
Johnson-Saunders Avatar
June 24, 2020 at 1:02 PM
Your pen is powerful, Eileen. I believe that our pens and voices came make a difference around the world. I am praying for you and your beautiful country. I am saddened by the evil and greed of this world, but I try to be hopeful and prayerful, otherwise the weight of it would crush me. Sending much love and prayers to you, Rhonda xx
Trifiatis Avatar
June 23, 2020 at 1:57 PM
I have been following for decades what is going on in Lebanon and, I regret to say, that the situation brews troubles. Your Acrostic is what Lebanon needs to find peace! God bless Lebanon and you my dearest, Eileen! Filakia!
Manassian Avatar
June 23, 2020 at 11:35 PM
Thank you, my dear philospher poet. Yes, this country has gone through much tumult in the past and things don't look good at present. We can only pray and write. What else is there to be done. Thank you for your kind words, dear. Filakia
Dietrich Avatar
June 21, 2020 at 2:46 PM
I always heard such lovely things about your country. I do not know all that is going on there, but I pray your beloved country gets the freedom it deserves.
Manassian Avatar
June 23, 2020 at 11:34 PM
Thanks, Andrea. Lebanon is mentioned often in the Bible. The verse in Psalm is beautiful: "The Righteous shall flourish like the cedards of Lebanon." I hope the country itself flourishes, not just its beautiful cedars. Thanks for the visit.
Watt Avatar
June 20, 2020 at 6:09 PM
Your poetic voice of passion is finely honed, dear Eileen. Your demands for en end to corruption, injustice, economic oppression, greed, and bribery are eloquent and to the point. I wish the best for you and your beautiful nation. I am sorry to hear things feel so bleak for you, but never lose hope, my friend. Your voice is an important part of the change that needs to occur. Thank you for your visit today. God bless you ~ John
Manassian Avatar
June 23, 2020 at 11:33 PM
Thank you, John. Your comment is a source of encouragement to me. It is grately appreciated. Blessings to you and your loved ones.
Lamoureux Avatar
June 20, 2020 at 3:17 PM
Thanks for the visit, sorry to hear you are feeling sad. I haven’t been very inspired of late. Thanks for the soup mail and for looking out for me. Hugs Rick.
Manassian Avatar
June 23, 2020 at 11:32 PM
I will always look out for a dear and precious friend. Yes, I have been feeling sad of late. I try to get past the gloom. I pray and listen to encouraging hope filled messages by Max Lucado. It's a daily struggle. Blessings, dear.
Rodrigues Avatar
June 20, 2020 at 3:09 PM
Well written with great passion!
Manassian Avatar
June 23, 2020 at 11:30 PM
Yes,, Lebanon has gone through much in its history. One can only passionately hope for better days. Thanks for the visit.
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