Free From the Killick

I'm not a seafarer, but took a risk and dove right in,
as if from cliff height and wound up floundering
in the dark abysmal depths of a roiling ocean.
From pages of 'The Rime of the Ancient Mariner,'
I wore the feathered omen draped around my shoulders.
When a marriage ends, the mast is cracked, mainsail tattered.
The bottle was his failing; but the burden was mine.
His raging storm was a whirlpool of self-loathing.
Certain to drown if I lingered with him much longer,
I was in need of a way out of my wretched life.

Frowns were etched into my brow from doleful despair,
as we sailed beneath stormy skies on a battered ship.
My cries were much louder than the roar of the ocean,
but he didn't seem to care whether he lived or died.
I desperately fought to keep him tethered to my side
but he was the killick that kept dragging me down.
I couldn't save us both, broke free from the chain,
and watched Coleridge's boa floating in the flotsam.
I stood on the beach, searching each crested wave 
but when the tide ebbed, I walked away.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Poteet Avatar
September 4, 2025 at 6:44 AM
Well-told - the negative perspective of an unneeded, unwanted anchor. His, the bottle failed him; yours, drags you down no more thanks to your courageous choice. Title tells much truth. Back for congratulations on your placement; but added kudoes on such a well-written piece, Lin.
Lane Avatar
September 4, 2025 at 7:04 AM
I'm grateful that you read my verses and more pleased by your total comprehension. Thanks, ever so much, Reason ;-)
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August 29, 2025 at 4:47 AM
Lin, like an albatross around your neck finally removed. This is a painful reminiscence and reflects a lot of hurt and sad times, which now fortunately are viewed with poetic grace and perspective. Isn't amazing how we put up with things for a long time, and then realize we just can't. When I read this, it gives me hope we will be able to break free as a society from that which weighs all of us down. BTW, you are amazing!!
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August 30, 2025 at 9:38 AM
What a brave man you are to take a stab at commenting on this one. It’s really not jigsaw puzzle that needs explanation, is it? There comes a time when reality must be accepted. Big smile at your last sentence... I'm not. ;-)
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