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Ivy climbs the wall Spreading fingers here and there Forming leafy art

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Caren Krutsinger

Date: 7/13/2019 10:40:00 PM

Sometimes the best poems have the fewest words; this is one of them.

Ann Foster

Date: 7/13/2019 7:40:00 PM

I love this. Simple, elegant, lovely. Ann

Mahtab Bangalee

Date: 7/9/2019 4:31:00 AM

beautiful sharing

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 7/6/2019 3:52:00 PM

Congratulations on having this wonderful haiku featured Barbara. Have a great week! xxoo

Date: 8/6/2009 5:40:00 PM

You've got me smiling with this apt description. I really like the last line. Nice use of personification. Creative view. Thank you for sharing your haiku with us and for your kind comment on my senryu. Karen

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/4/2009 10:00:00 AM

Barbara, this is an excellent Haiku. Thank you for sharing it. Love, Carol

James Fraser

Date: 8/4/2009 9:19:00 AM

The ivy does just this Barbara, not too much, not too little. Nice Haiku>>James

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 8/4/2009 4:04:00 AM

one word-awesome--charma

Nathan Leccese

Date: 8/4/2009 2:56:00 AM

Beautiful picture painted here in this Haiku. I love this form so much. The power that is contained in just 17 syllables is amazing! Wonderful job. Nate

Michael Jordan

Date: 8/3/2009 9:00:00 PM

Barbara - excellent haiku - I personally love ivory and plan to build a deck with terrace and ivory in our back yard around our spa - God Bless, MJ