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Free Form Art

Ivy climbs the wall
Spreading fingers here and there
Forming leafy art

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Caren Krutsinger

July 13, 2019 at 10:40 PM

Sometimes the best poems have the fewest words; this is one of them.

Ann Foster

July 13, 2019 at 7:40 PM

I love this. Simple, elegant, lovely. Ann

Mahtab Bangalee

July 9, 2019 at 4:31 AM

beautiful sharing

Connie Marcum Wong

July 6, 2019 at 3:52 PM

Congratulations on having this wonderful haiku featured Barbara. Have a great week! xxoo

August 6, 2009 at 5:40 PM

You've got me smiling with this apt description. I really like the last line. Nice use of personification. Creative view. Thank you for sharing your haiku with us and for your kind comment on my senryu. Karen

Carol Sunshine Brown

August 4, 2009 at 10:00 AM

Barbara, this is an excellent Haiku. Thank you for sharing it. Love, Carol

James Fraser

August 4, 2009 at 9:19 AM

The ivy does just this Barbara, not too much, not too little. Nice Haiku>>James

Charmaine Chircop

August 4, 2009 at 4:04 AM

one word-awesome--charma

Nathan Leccese

August 4, 2009 at 2:56 AM

Beautiful picture painted here in this Haiku. I love this form so much. The power that is contained in just 17 syllables is amazing! Wonderful job. Nate

Michael Jordan

August 3, 2009 at 9:00 PM

Barbara - excellent haiku - I personally love ivory and plan to build a deck with terrace and ivory in our back yard around our spa - God Bless, MJ

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