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Fredrick - September 12, 1979

He was coming. He was coming fast. He was coming to pay us a visit. A brooding, lethal monster 30 miles out. He was coming straight at us and nothing or no one could stop him Our house was on the back bay of Biloxi, a short distance from the beach so we evacuated twenty miles inland to a friend’s brick house in the woods I was afraid, yet fascinated Curious, an irresistible urge drew me outside to watch as he began his attack. The first gusts were like a late summer breeze calm, stronger, calm, stronger, stronger but the trees seemed familiar with that bending, swaying and springing back upright As the gusts blew in more powerful and threatening they seemed a little unsettled and alarmed. Their leaves were getting stripped and scattered By five o’clock they were fighting for their lives The older, stiffer trees were crackling and snapping while the younger, more limber and flexible ones were bending violently almost to the ground with each blow then not back upright as before because the reflex action and momentum sent them halfway back the other direction. By nightfall there were no more gusts. He came chugging in howling and screaming, roaring and raging, shaking our foundations with winds clocked at 135-140 MPH. I timidly (and foolishly) slipped back out. I could not have heard myself scream... For the rest of the night we huddled together in the kitchen with candles and a transistor radio. Windows shattered and blew out. Part of the roof was ripped off. Next morning it took all day to cut our way back home Roads clogged with timber; the whole forest broken and uprooted We came upon what at first looked like a new-cut firebreak, a swath maybe fifty yards wide and five hundred yards long We stood there kind of gawking at each other then realized it was where one of his mighty spawns had touched down… The power was out for two weeks There was a dip in the road where a stream flooded This is where we took our baths The whole neighborhood met there armed with bar soap, washrags and towels Actually, it was quite pleasant and enjoyable sitting contentedly, letting the cool water flow over us while we gossiped with our friends Pascagoula, MS and the Alabama coast bore the brunt of Mother Nature's fury. One of the giant cranes at Ingalls Shipbuilders toppled over and crashed in the water. Biloxi was in the western quadrant and got only wind and rain Later I heard some life-long residents say this was a minor nuisance compared to ten years earlier when Camille made landfall

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Date: 9/13/2017 9:17:00 PM
Fantastic write, ,Tim, congratulations on your win hugs Eve
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Date: 9/12/2017 10:12:00 AM
The vivid description of palm trees bending and snapping! Fine win! Congrats!
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Date: 9/12/2017 9:33:00 AM
Well done with detail and the reader can feel this while reading it. Congratulations for your win :)
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Date: 6/14/2016 3:15:00 PM
wow, tim, that is a memorable storm, but not one I ever want to be part of. Storms are so darn scary. It was good to get a visit from you. I might have something to tell you in a soupmail later (if the news is good, otherwise, I will be crying) Congrats for your win with this great story telling style of yours.
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Date: 6/11/2016 6:45:00 AM
Terrific write,really!Congratulations Tim!
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Date: 6/11/2016 12:19:00 AM
Thank you for entering my contest Tim 'CT
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Date: 7/16/2015 7:53:00 PM
Wow, that would have really been something! I think I will stay here where it is safe. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 7/14/2015 2:13:00 AM
Hi Tim Congrats on Carol's story, poem CONTEST. Always ~~ LINDA ~~
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Date: 7/14/2015 12:28:00 AM
TIM,, Congratulations on your awesome story win. Love SKAT
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Date: 7/13/2015 2:34:00 PM
wow what a terrifying account so glad we don't get them in the UK - congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 6/8/2013 10:04:00 AM
Congratulations Tim with this outstanding account of your experience...
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Date: 6/7/2013 9:51:00 AM
Tim, CONGRATULATIONS!!! :-) this is a very pleasing poem... glad to see it on Gail's winning list.. xox~Linda
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Date: 4/11/2013 9:27:00 AM
You certainly tell about the mighty force of nature, and the insignificance of we humans when it decides to act. It's tornados in my part of the country. I've read several of your pieces this morning, and enjoyed them all. Thanks for the fine writing... Jack
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Date: 4/9/2013 1:50:00 PM
Hey Tim. Great story....and write...it is memorable isn't it? Guess what I was in Camille! We lived in Gulfport where the eye hit...maybe I'll write about it someday....you have just inspired me...
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