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Fred Wins the Lottery

Winning millions, Fred acted insane, Raced his new Benz and crashed in the rain. All that money he won Went for surgeries done To repair both his body and brain! For Susan Burch's Lottery Ticket Limerick Poetry Contest

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Date: 12/28/2013 10:58:00 PM
Andrea Such a cute and silly write. Made me chuckle and smile. HHHMM I wouldn't waste it on a car to crash. I'd buy a farm and horsie living life country style. YEE HAW LOL Thanks for the great comment on my Love Garden poem. Hugs
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Date: 8/4/2013 5:30:00 PM
Oh, I love this cute little limerick,,, is it true story. I've watched that show " how the lottery changed my life" . glad you liked my The Great Swan " the part about woods being a metaphor for the sick body . WAS NOT there first time you read.
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Date: 4/4/2013 6:40:00 AM
Way to go Fred!...haha
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Date: 1/18/2012 6:00:00 PM
YOU'RE FUNNY...GOOD ONE
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Date: 1/16/2012 8:51:00 PM
hi.... how are you???? me wishing on a lottery win.. that way i don't have to work...
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Date: 1/16/2012 7:30:00 PM
Congrats, Andrea. Excellent. Nice going. luv Ralph
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Date: 1/16/2012 2:57:00 PM
Love this, Andrea. Congrats on your win. Love, Kim
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Date: 1/16/2012 11:18:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Susan Burch's "Lottery Ticket Limerick" contest Andrea. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/16/2012 6:34:00 AM
Congratulations! Very GOOD! :)
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Date: 1/16/2012 5:35:00 AM
no benz, no brain..hahaha!... great job and sweet congrats , andie! :)
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Date: 1/16/2012 1:40:00 AM
Andrea congrats on your win, sell the benz..David
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Date: 1/15/2012 10:51:00 PM
ANDREA,, a wonderful win in Susan's contest ;-) congratulations, on a poem well done,..always yours one and only,..p.d.
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Date: 1/15/2012 5:02:00 PM
Fred and Bud must be brothers!!! :) hee hee! Congrats!
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Date: 1/15/2012 1:46:00 PM
Congratulations Andrea. Elizabeth
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Date: 1/15/2012 1:05:00 PM
All that money really did go to his head, right? .... he got UN-lucky and his doctors got REAL lucky!! Ka-ching! ....Congrats, Andrea, Love, Gwendolen
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Date: 1/15/2012 12:28:00 PM
congrats Andrea on a super second place win for this lottery Limerick luv.. big brown eyes enjoyed..oh..haha..
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Date: 1/13/2012 12:27:00 AM
Modern medicine can cure many things....stupidity isn't amongst them. ;-) Fun write :-)
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Date: 1/10/2012 12:22:00 AM
The late George Harrison described those persons who gained the world and lost their soul. That was from his only track "Within You, Without You" on the "Sgt. Pepper's Lonely Hearts Club Band" album by the Beatles. Your limerick reminded me of those lyrics. Good write.
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Date: 1/10/2012 12:01:00 AM
Yup, being a winner can turn us into losers real fast. Guess I should consider myself lucky for never having won. Yeah, right. Nice write - good luck in the contest.
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Date: 1/9/2012 3:00:00 PM
LOL, love it! Thanks for a good chuckle
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Date: 1/9/2012 1:20:00 AM
Nice one enjoyed reading it.Best of luck for the contest...........spandan.
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Date: 1/8/2012 10:22:00 PM
Very cute Andrea. And not too far off the track. I read that most lottery winners crash in one way or another. Great job here. Sure to be a winner. God Bless, JB
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Date: 1/8/2012 2:16:00 PM
Poor Fred, hope you are doing okay Andrea, all the best for the contest and enjoy what is left of your weekend. :) love Wilma
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Date: 1/8/2012 10:26:00 AM
Unlucky Fred!! ha ha. You are the master with a limerick plan for disaster!! I sent you a Gmail..importante!.. lol. Love, Gwendolen
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Date: 1/8/2012 9:42:00 AM
creative,,,,funny,,your personality is so wonderful....
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