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Freakish Fanny

Freakish Fanny fled fine Finland For far-fetched Formosa fields, Forsaking fantastic fiords forever Forfeiting flourishing forests, Frigid fertile farmland, festivals Forgetting feared future fighting. written January 22, 2022

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Caren Krutsinger

Date: 1/25/2022 1:34:00 AM

I love this so much!

L Milton Hankins
Date: 1/25/2022 9:08:00 AM

I love to do these. Yes, I do, but they have to make logical sense to me. I can't just put words that start with the same letter together. I have to be able to read them and see that they make sense. I worked for a long time on this one.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 1/23/2022 1:10:00 AM

Lol, you sure know how to write an alliteration Milton. You're a master of many forms, some Id never even heard of. Tom

L Milton Hankins
Date: 1/23/2022 9:22:00 AM

Oh, Tom, you are just being kind. I enjoy going through the Types of Poems on PS and trying them out. I try to fit the theme of my poem to a form/format that works well. Sometimes I get it right! (chuckling). Thanks!

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 1/22/2022 7:43:00 PM

Fun and fetching!

L Milton Hankins
Date: 1/22/2022 8:57:00 PM

My general rule when writing these is will it make good sense when read, and this one does. Thanks! I enjoyed writing it.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 1/22/2022 7:31:00 PM

Third line is my favorite, Milton. Some nice alliteration!

L Milton Hankins
Date: 1/22/2022 8:57:00 PM

Thanks, Kim. Glad you enjoyed it.