L Milton Hankins Poet Alliteration

Freakish Fanny

Freakish Fanny fled fine Finland
For far-fetched Formosa fields,
Forsaking fantastic fiords forever
Forfeiting flourishing forests,
Frigid fertile farmland, festivals
Forgetting feared future fighting.

written January 22, 2022

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Caren Krutsinger January 25, 2022 at 1:34 AM I love this so much! L Milton Hankins January 25, 2022 at 9:08 AM I love to do these. Yes, I do, but they have to make logical sense to me. I can't just put words that start with the same letter together. I have to be able to read them and see that they make sense. I worked for a long time on this one.

Tom Cunningham January 23, 2022 at 1:10 AM Lol, you sure know how to write an alliteration Milton. You're a master of many forms, some Id never even heard of. Tom L Milton Hankins January 23, 2022 at 9:22 AM Oh, Tom, you are just being kind. I enjoy going through the Types of Poems on PS and trying them out. I try to fit the theme of my poem to a form/format that works well. Sometimes I get it right! (chuckling). Thanks!

Michelle Faulkner January 22, 2022 at 7:43 PM Fun and fetching! L Milton Hankins January 22, 2022 at 8:57 PM My general rule when writing these is will it make good sense when read, and this one does. Thanks! I enjoyed writing it.

Kim Rodrigues January 22, 2022 at 7:31 PM Third line is my favorite, Milton. Some nice alliteration! L Milton Hankins January 22, 2022 at 8:57 PM Thanks, Kim. Glad you enjoyed it.