Freakazoid

There's a bird in my head 
and it's freaking me out
because it won't stop chirping.

All I can envision 
are plastic dolls 
smoking cigarettes in the panic room
and talking about boys
The bird keeps chirping.
I'm trying to read 
this guy's suicide note
but it's written in ransom note effect
so I'm a little confused.
The bird keeps chirping.
This paper thin world
keeps slicing my skin
with stinging swipes
from the razor rims of its paper thin sheets
The bird keeps chirping.
Blood rains in a bottomless drip
like I'm a hemophiliac 
but I'm not
or am I?
The bird keeps chirping.
I'm paralyzed 
like a tree rooted into the Earth
amidst a gust of wind
my human arms flail in hysteria
but the rest of me 
is a mannequin.
The bird keeps chirping.
The world is fuzzy
like a limb that has slipped into slumber
The bird keeps chirping.
static feedback
is all that's left
it's the only thing that remains real
and I can't see straight within the inert realm
The bird keeps chirping.
There's a vice grip 
locked around my throbbing temples
as cold as steel's surface
The bird keeps chirping.
A single click 
rose from out of nowhere
and somehow broke through the noise 
but still
The bird keeps chirping.
Death's edge
feels like it's an inch beyond my stagnant feet
The bird keeps chirping.
The world disintegrates 
as fast as a scorching hot bullet 
cutting through a cardboard target
cutting through skin
cutting through bone.
cutting through life.
The bird stops chirping.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 12/26/2011 9:58:00 AM
This is pretty amazing, you have the most interesting writing style! i really love it Jordyn
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Date: 12/23/2011 11:04:00 PM
This rhythm is very satisfying. Not too fast, not too slow, it pulls me along, pulls me in, to feeling the end.
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Date: 12/9/2011 6:40:00 AM
Very interesting, kyle. you're doing great, hope to hear more in the future, Sarah :)
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Date: 12/8/2011 4:47:00 PM
This one is great! I really enjoyed reading. :D Keep up the awesome work, yeah? Always, Laura
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