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Frazzled

Out naked she lay in the sun Exposing her boobs and her bum The sun was too hot Red raw burn't the lot Her sun-baking days are now done

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Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 7/14/2025 9:33:00 AM

Ouch! Lots of fun Christine. Congratulations! :)

Terry Miller

Date: 7/14/2025 2:39:00 AM

Great meter in this one, funny too, congratulations

Christine Watts
Date: 7/14/2025 4:34:00 AM

Hi Terry Thank you always fun to try these ones lol Cheers Christine

Janice Canerdy

Date: 7/13/2025 6:50:00 PM

Ouch! Pass the aloe vera gel. LOL! CONGRATS on your win, Christina. Janice

Christine Watts
Date: 7/14/2025 4:33:00 AM

Hi Janice Thanks and aloe vera much appreciated lol Cheers Christine

Tania Kitchin

Date: 7/13/2025 2:41:00 PM

Christine, congratulations on your winning placement with your cute limerick.

Christine Watts
Date: 7/13/2025 6:19:00 PM

Hi Tania Thank you I enjoyed having a go at this one too Cheers Christine

Crystol Woods

Date: 7/13/2025 12:20:00 PM

Very good meter and flow! It dances on the tongue! Congratulations! Xo

Christine Watts
Date: 7/13/2025 6:20:00 PM

Sorry about the presentation a bit cramped

Christine Watts
Date: 7/13/2025 6:17:00 PM

Hi Crystol Thank you I am pleased you enjoyed this one Here is another Lol couldn't resist The meter should flow off the tongue When written correctly it's done A limerick write With syllables right Should really be the winning one Christine 14/7/2025

Gershon Wolf

Date: 6/30/2025 7:51:00 PM

Gee, sounds as if she's only half-baked. lol. ~ gw

Christine Watts
Date: 7/2/2025 11:51:00 PM

Hi Gershon lol Probably well done I think Cheers Chris