Frazzled


Out naked she lay in the sun
Exposing her boobs and her bum
The sun was too hot
Red raw burn't the lot
Her sun-baking days are now done

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Date: 7/14/2025 9:33:00 AM
Ouch! Lots of fun Christine. Congratulations! :)
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Date: 7/14/2025 2:39:00 AM
Great meter in this one, funny too, congratulations
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Christine Watts
Date: 7/14/2025 4:34:00 AM
Hi Terry Thank you always fun to try these ones lol Cheers Christine
Date: 7/13/2025 6:50:00 PM
Ouch! Pass the aloe vera gel. LOL! CONGRATS on your win, Christina. Janice
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Date: 7/14/2025 4:33:00 AM
Hi Janice Thanks and aloe vera much appreciated lol Cheers Christine
Date: 7/13/2025 2:41:00 PM
Christine, congratulations on your winning placement with your cute limerick.
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Date: 7/13/2025 6:19:00 PM
Hi Tania Thank you I enjoyed having a go at this one too Cheers Christine
Date: 7/13/2025 12:20:00 PM
Very good meter and flow! It dances on the tongue! Congratulations! Xo
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Christine Watts
Date: 7/13/2025 6:20:00 PM
Sorry about the presentation a bit cramped
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Christine Watts
Date: 7/13/2025 6:17:00 PM
Hi Crystol Thank you I am pleased you enjoyed this one Here is another Lol couldn't resist The meter should flow off the tongue When written correctly it's done A limerick write With syllables right Should really be the winning one Christine 14/7/2025
Date: 6/30/2025 7:51:00 PM
Gee, sounds as if she's only half-baked. lol. ~ gw
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Date: 7/2/2025 11:51:00 PM
Hi Gershon lol Probably well done I think Cheers Chris
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