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Frazzled


Out naked she lay in the sun
Exposing her boobs and her bum
The sun was too hot
Red raw burn't the lot
Her sun-baking days are now done

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Linda Alice Fowler

July 14, 2025 at 9:33 AM

Ouch! Lots of fun Christine. Congratulations! :)

Terry Miller

July 14, 2025 at 2:39 AM

Great meter in this one, funny too, congratulations

Christine Watts

July 14, 2025 at 4:34 AM

Hi Terry Thank you always fun to try these ones lol Cheers Christine

Janice Canerdy

July 13, 2025 at 6:50 PM

Ouch! Pass the aloe vera gel. LOL! CONGRATS on your win, Christina. Janice

Christine Watts

July 14, 2025 at 4:33 AM

Hi Janice Thanks and aloe vera much appreciated lol Cheers Christine

Tania Kitchin

July 13, 2025 at 2:41 PM

Christine, congratulations on your winning placement with your cute limerick.

Christine Watts

July 13, 2025 at 6:19 PM

Hi Tania Thank you I enjoyed having a go at this one too Cheers Christine

Crystol Woods

July 13, 2025 at 12:20 PM

Very good meter and flow! It dances on the tongue! Congratulations! Xo

Christine Watts

July 13, 2025 at 6:20 PM

Sorry about the presentation a bit cramped

Christine Watts

July 13, 2025 at 6:17 PM

Hi Crystol Thank you I am pleased you enjoyed this one Here is another Lol couldn't resist The meter should flow off the tongue When written correctly it's done A limerick write With syllables right Should really be the winning one Christine 14/7/2025