Get Your Premium Membership

Frazzled

Out naked she lay in the sun Exposing her boobs and her bum The sun was too hot Red raw burn't the lot Her sun-baking days are now done

Copyright © | Year Posted 2025




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 7/14/2025 9:33:00 AM
Ouch! Lots of fun Christine. Congratulations! :)
Login to Reply
Date: 7/14/2025 2:39:00 AM
Great meter in this one, funny too, congratulations
Login to Reply
Watts Avatar
Christine Watts
Date: 7/14/2025 4:34:00 AM
Hi Terry Thank you always fun to try these ones lol Cheers Christine
Date: 7/13/2025 6:50:00 PM
Ouch! Pass the aloe vera gel. LOL! CONGRATS on your win, Christina. Janice
Login to Reply
Watts Avatar
Christine Watts
Date: 7/14/2025 4:33:00 AM
Hi Janice Thanks and aloe vera much appreciated lol Cheers Christine
Date: 7/13/2025 2:41:00 PM
Christine, congratulations on your winning placement with your cute limerick.
Login to Reply
Watts Avatar
Christine Watts
Date: 7/13/2025 6:19:00 PM
Hi Tania Thank you I enjoyed having a go at this one too Cheers Christine
Date: 7/13/2025 12:20:00 PM
Very good meter and flow! It dances on the tongue! Congratulations! Xo
Login to Reply
Watts Avatar
Christine Watts
Date: 7/13/2025 6:20:00 PM
Sorry about the presentation a bit cramped
Watts Avatar
Christine Watts
Date: 7/13/2025 6:17:00 PM
Hi Crystol Thank you I am pleased you enjoyed this one Here is another Lol couldn't resist The meter should flow off the tongue When written correctly it's done A limerick write With syllables right Should really be the winning one Christine 14/7/2025
Date: 6/30/2025 7:51:00 PM
Gee, sounds as if she's only half-baked. lol. ~ gw
Login to Reply
Watts Avatar
Christine Watts
Date: 7/2/2025 11:51:00 PM
Hi Gershon lol Probably well done I think Cheers Chris

Book: Radiant Verses: A Journey Through Inspiring Poetry