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June 22, 2023 ~ F word contest by Constance La France

Frazzled

My eyes are half closed for I fear to see
what worry and anxiety have made of me.
All day I have been twisted out of shape,
wincing at my disheveled appearance.
Life has taken a toll with its interference.

My mirrored face is a prism, a color spectrum,
frazzled reflections of the paths I've traveled.
It's no wonder I look completely unraveled
and seem to be moving in opposite directions.

I'm an abstract work of art, hastily brushed
with my own hand when I'm feeling rushed.
Blue when sadness tears my world in two,
Cadmium yellow on days when I feel mellow.

When anger tints darkness on my soul, my cheeks
are flushed with shades of pink. It's been weeks
since I've felt bold enough to paint with oils.
Misfortune leaves me feeling like used tin foil
or memories that should be buried in the soil.

I have need to gather all of my frazzled thoughts
and loosen them from the ropes that tether me.
Too many worries have wrinkled my facial parts
and from spying eyes that I despise, I need to be free.
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Allison Avatar
June 23, 2023 at 8:19 AM
wow wow wow Lin the imagery and image are so intense - thought provoking piece indeed which I need to come back and revisit with my sunglasses on!!. excellent ink my friend a massive fave for so many reasons. hugs Jan xx
Kauffman Avatar
June 22, 2023 at 2:37 PM
Lin, your poem is a perfect, vivid description of "frazzled!" Love the way you incorporated an artist's palette of colors and the painting. Is it one of yours? It is perfect for your poem. Sending you blessings of tranquility my friend. May peace abide in your "frazzled" heart.
Lane Avatar
June 22, 2023 at 11:13 PM
Hi Sam. I'm pleased you like this one. Thanks. No, this is not my painting. I've never tried an abstract, although some who've seen my work may think otherwise. lol
Koplin Avatar
June 22, 2023 at 1:34 PM
Toss them out Lin. There will be new ones tomorrow. We can only take one day at a time, my friend, so don't let the little things get to you.
Lane Avatar
June 22, 2023 at 11:12 PM
Unfortunately, you're right, Mark. Thanks for reading and commenting. Missing you.
Andresen Avatar
June 22, 2023 at 10:33 AM
- A poem with deep feelings ... all the troublesome worries we carry with us ... worry consumes an incredible amount of time and energy ... best wishes in the contest, Lin - hugs
Andresen Avatar
June 22, 2023 at 12:06 PM
True
Lane Avatar
June 22, 2023 at 10:37 AM
Sometimes we end up in a state of being frazzled by too many worries, and usually most of them are things we can't do anything about changing them. Thanks, Anne-Lise.
Goldsmith Avatar
June 22, 2023 at 10:26 AM
Your "Frazzled" is a wonderful Rhyme write/picture. I really enjoyed this one. Have a fun day writing away..................
Lane Avatar
June 22, 2023 at 10:36 AM
Thanks a bunch for the kudos, Paula. I'm writing. ;-)
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