frankly silent - ''nah''
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Poetic Form: Senryu
Inspired: 2024 August 14
Image: N/A
some light a candle
and some blow it out ~ and some
watch the whole house burn
one in three ~ crazy
~ look to your right then left ~ they're
okay ~ then you're it
camp in the wild told
to fish for food ~ better be
cows in the water
McDonald lines ~ do
tax returns or menu stares ~
same when you were six
Copyright © Hilo Poet | Year Posted 2024
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