Frank Lane 1877-1913

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Poem 35 

From the anthology Voices From Mt. Olive Cemetery, a work in progress.

Frank Lane

1877-1913

RS was my best friend,

A friend ever to the end.

Together we footed and mounted 

The pliant limbs of the Hybrid Tree

On County Road,

And wetfully whistled,

As with birds in the warm zephyrs 

Of summer solstice,

At the lassies down below, 

With young and perfumed necks naked,

Ready and shivering,

For the ghost dance.

Together we skipped smooth stones,

Upon the staid surfaces 

Of the state school pond,

Out back among the chicken coops

And the pig pens;

We howled and hollered,

As with hysterical night beasts,

Wild under the stars!

Together we passed scented posies to Lottie Gordon,

Our intended island of private discovery,

Our intended treasure,

Our intended Holy Grail!

And with silent tandem ascensions,

There in the enticing moon shadows,

RS and I found a home in the Gordon heights,

Inside the inviting spread-out mansion,

Of a hundred breathless whispers.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 4/8/2017 11:30:00 AM
To think of dying at 36.... Well done, Stark. I'm glad to see you continuing with this project. Love the ending, here!
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Date: 4/8/2017 1:25:00 PM
Thanks Doug.
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Date: 4/8/2017 1:22:00 PM
Thanks Phillip for your comment.
Date: 4/8/2017 1:39:00 AM
Phenomenal upon first read and certainly worthy a very thorough dig through. It reminds a bit of Longfellow but more readable and concise. I'll look forward to reading more from your pen.
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Date: 4/8/2017 9:53:00 AM
Thanks Phillip for your comment.
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