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Fragrant Whispers

Each word
           From deep within
           I heard

           Husky
           Inaudible;
           Musky

           The smell
           Of perfumed sighs
           Chanel.

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Form: Musette
Author: Paul Callus ~ 26 Nov 2014 
Contest: Whispers of a Muse
Sponsor: nette onclaud
Placed: 6th

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Susan Ashley Date: 11/27/2017 8:34:00 PM A very seductive and sensual write Paul. Fragrant whispers with the intoxicated exhale of satisfaction.. stirring poetry my talented friend. Warmest wishes always ~Susan Login to Reply Paul Callus Date: 11/28/2017 3:59:00 PM You never fail to read my poems from the outside and inside, Susan! Thank you my friend. ~ Warm regards // paul

Eileen Manassian Date: 1/3/2016 5:17:00 PM I see I've been here before, Paul....lovely write!! Login to Reply Paul Callus Date: 1/4/2016 1:22:00 PM Yes, you have been here before, Eileen, but any repeat visits from you are most welcome:) Hugs *~* paul

Andrea Dietrich Date: 12/15/2014 3:29:00 PM I keep clicking on your poems and can't seem to find one I have not seen already. so back to this gem. I really liked it. May you have many more wins. Login to Reply Paul Callus Date: 12/15/2014 3:48:00 PM Thank you for stopping by Andrea....I thought for a minute that you needed to borrow my Chanel:) goodnight.....paul

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders Date: 12/7/2014 10:46:00 PM I loved this the first time I read it, Paul! Congrats to you...hugs, Rhonda Login to Reply Paul Callus Date: 12/8/2014 5:26:00 AM Thank you Rhonda for coming back with congrats; much appreciated. // paul

Kayod5 Kayode Date: 12/6/2014 11:40:00 PM Congrats on the win Paul,this hits it again...huggs Login to Reply Paul Callus Date: 12/7/2014 2:52:00 PM Many thanks Kayod5. Hope you had a lovely weekend. // paul

Joseph May Date: 12/6/2014 8:01:00 PM Very nicely penned Paul...Congrats on the win Login to Reply Paul Callus Date: 12/7/2014 2:49:00 PM Thank you Joseph; comments and visit are appreciated. // paul

Robert Lindley Date: 12/6/2014 10:50:00 AM Evokes whispers of love and mystery to me. All the ingredients for a romantic tryst or long and deep relationship. Very clever and bravo on your win!! Solid 7 from me.. Login to Reply Paul Callus Date: 12/6/2014 3:35:00 PM Very uplifting feedback, my friend. Thank you for stopping by once again with congrats and a high rating. // paul

Andrea Dietrich Date: 12/4/2014 7:27:00 PM very nice, Paul. I Just adore CHanel too!! Congrats. Login to Reply Paul Callus Date: 12/5/2014 4:02:00 PM Thank you Andrea; I love the smell, too!

Dr. Upma A. Sharma Date: 12/4/2014 4:45:00 AM And back again wid big congrats on ur awesome write Paul! Login to Reply Paul Callus Date: 12/4/2014 8:11:00 AM Thank you for stopping by again with congrats, Upma! Have a nice day! // paul

Maurice Yvonne Date: 12/3/2014 3:53:00 PM So very creative as always. I really don't know how they can judge these there are so many wonderful writes. It is why I do not do contests I would have so many tied for first. A wonderful poem Paul! Login to Reply Paul Callus Date: 12/4/2014 8:08:00 AM Thank you Maurice. I'm like you....I would not want to be a sole judge; I do not envy our sponsors for they have a hard job on their hands. cheers.// paul

Sandra Haight Date: 12/3/2014 3:13:00 PM Very nice perfumed words, Paul! Congratulations on your win. Sandra Login to Reply Paul Callus Date: 12/3/2014 3:49:00 PM Thank you Sandra! your 'perfumed' comments are most welcome. // paul

Nette Onclaud Date: 12/3/2014 10:28:00 AM paul, you scented this superb work with a whiff.. chanel!... okay, you win!.. thanks for being part of my contest with shining congrats! Login to Reply Paul Callus Date: 12/3/2014 12:49:00 PM Thank you Nette! I did try to attract you with perfumed words! I wonder what you would have said had I entered my other muzette...Prayer, instead! // paul

Brenda Meier-Hans Date: 12/3/2014 9:43:00 AM I'm glad after you lost sleep over this contest Nette chose this for the winners list. Congratulations on your win Paul. Login to Reply Paul Callus Date: 12/3/2014 12:44:00 PM Hi Brenda! In the end I tossed a coin ... felt sorry for the other one though! Thank you. // paul

Jan Allison Date: 12/3/2014 9:33:00 AM Dropping back with my congrats Paul - it is a delight to read these poems again:-) Hugs Jan xx Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 12/3/2014 1:08:00 PM Aww likewise Paul :-) Hugs jan xxx Paul Callus Date: 12/3/2014 12:41:00 PM Thank you Jan; it is lovely to be on the same winners' list with you. Hugs // paul

Timothy Hicks Date: 12/1/2014 3:09:00 AM Your last three lines could almost run solo as a haiku. You took care of what little words you had at your disposal. Enjoyed the muse. Login to Reply Paul Callus Date: 12/2/2014 3:24:00 PM Hi Timothy...you enjoyed the muse...I enjoyed the comments! Thanks. // paul

Richard Lamoureux Date: 11/28/2014 2:59:00 PM Perfection, it brings to mind those sexy commercials. Login to Reply Paul Callus Date: 11/29/2014 4:25:00 PM Thank you Richard...yes, those 'sexy' commercials have a lot to do with it! // paul

Liam Mcdaid Date: 11/28/2014 1:26:00 PM smiling paul really very beautifully painted scent Login to Reply Paul Callus Date: 11/29/2014 4:26:00 PM Glad to see you smiling Liam!! Thank you for reading and commenting positively. // paul

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 11/28/2014 1:28:00 AM aromatic musette :D! Login to Reply Paul Callus Date: 11/28/2014 4:11:00 AM Hmmm smells nice! Wonder which your fav one is! :) // paul

Charmaine Chircop Date: 11/27/2014 7:24:00 PM Hmmm Chanel 5 ..I really like that one : ).Lovely poem Paul. Login to Reply Paul Callus Date: 11/28/2014 4:09:00 AM Thank you Charm! Soon there will be the local airport open day; my family and I always go....lots of perfumes to chose from (apart from chocs and drinks); makes a lovely evening out. // paul

Leon Enriquez Date: 11/27/2014 5:14:00 PM Dear Paul: Lovely read. Lovely write. Very nice when read out loud. All the best then, Leon. Login to Reply Paul Callus Date: 11/28/2014 4:12:00 AM Thank you for reading and commenting, Leon. All the best to you, too! // paul

Eileen Manassian Date: 11/27/2014 12:59:00 PM hmmmmmmmm......hmmmmmmmmm...... me likes. Login to Reply Paul Callus Date: 11/27/2014 2:45:00 PM Thank you Eileen. I have not entered this contest...as yet; waiting for feedback to help me make up my mind between this one and "Prayer".

Dr. Upma A. Sharma Date: 11/27/2014 10:05:00 AM Love the first one the most Paul! It's just perfect each word from deep within I heard! Sure to score high in contest too! Best wishes n an obvious 7. Login to Reply Paul Callus Date: 11/27/2014 11:26:00 AM You are very kind, Upma; your comments give much satisfaction! Thank you!:) // paul

Hija De La Luna Date: 11/27/2014 2:16:00 AM Fragrant scent runs deep :)) love this, Paul! Login to Reply Hija De La Luna Date: 12/4/2014 2:44:00 AM Big congrats, Paul! :) Paul Callus Date: 11/27/2014 11:22:00 AM Thank you Hija. Glad you like both fragrance and poem:) // paul

David Meade Date: 11/26/2014 9:49:00 PM Smells in the air -- some are loud and foul, sharp and spicy, while others are soft and sweet -- this my friend is well penned and the aroma is intoxicating. Login to Reply Paul Callus Date: 11/27/2014 10:18:00 AM So pleased that you enjoyed the intoxicating aroma, David. Thank you for yet another most welcome visit. // paul

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders Date: 11/26/2014 7:31:00 PM Paul, I love how you did yours...very lovely! I had such difficulty with this form. I agree with Jan, you've mastered it. Hugs, Rhonda Login to Reply Paul Callus Date: 11/27/2014 10:14:00 AM Hi Rhonda...so pleased you like this Musette; I enjoyed reading yours...I think it's a winner! Hugs // paul

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