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Fragrant Whispers


           Each word
           From deep within
           I heard

           Husky
           Inaudible;
           Musky

           The smell
           Of perfumed sighs
           Chanel.

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Form: Musette
Author: Paul Callus ~ 26 Nov 2014 
Contest: Whispers of a Muse
Sponsor: nette onclaud
Placed: 6th

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 11/27/2017 8:34:00 PM
A very seductive and sensual write Paul. Fragrant whispers with the intoxicated exhale of satisfaction.. stirring poetry my talented friend. Warmest wishes always ~Susan
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Paul Callus
Date: 11/28/2017 3:59:00 PM
You never fail to read my poems from the outside and inside, Susan! Thank you my friend. ~ Warm regards // paul
Date: 1/3/2016 5:17:00 PM
I see I've been here before, Paul....lovely write!!
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Paul Callus
Date: 1/4/2016 1:22:00 PM
Yes, you have been here before, Eileen, but any repeat visits from you are most welcome:) Hugs *~* paul
Date: 12/15/2014 3:29:00 PM
I keep clicking on your poems and can't seem to find one I have not seen already. so back to this gem. I really liked it. May you have many more wins.
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Date: 12/15/2014 3:48:00 PM
Thank you for stopping by Andrea....I thought for a minute that you needed to borrow my Chanel:) goodnight.....paul
Date: 12/7/2014 10:46:00 PM
I loved this the first time I read it, Paul! Congrats to you...hugs, Rhonda
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Paul Callus
Date: 12/8/2014 5:26:00 AM
Thank you Rhonda for coming back with congrats; much appreciated. // paul
Date: 12/6/2014 11:40:00 PM
Congrats on the win Paul,this hits it again...huggs
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Paul Callus
Date: 12/7/2014 2:52:00 PM
Many thanks Kayod5. Hope you had a lovely weekend. // paul
Date: 12/6/2014 8:01:00 PM
Very nicely penned Paul...Congrats on the win
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Paul Callus
Date: 12/7/2014 2:49:00 PM
Thank you Joseph; comments and visit are appreciated. // paul
Date: 12/6/2014 10:50:00 AM
Evokes whispers of love and mystery to me. All the ingredients for a romantic tryst or long and deep relationship. Very clever and bravo on your win!! Solid 7 from me..
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Date: 12/6/2014 3:35:00 PM
Very uplifting feedback, my friend. Thank you for stopping by once again with congrats and a high rating. // paul
Date: 12/4/2014 7:27:00 PM
very nice, Paul. I Just adore CHanel too!! Congrats.
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Paul Callus
Date: 12/5/2014 4:02:00 PM
Thank you Andrea; I love the smell, too!
Date: 12/4/2014 4:45:00 AM
And back again wid big congrats on ur awesome write Paul!
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Paul Callus
Date: 12/4/2014 8:11:00 AM
Thank you for stopping by again with congrats, Upma! Have a nice day! // paul
Date: 12/3/2014 3:53:00 PM
So very creative as always. I really don't know how they can judge these there are so many wonderful writes. It is why I do not do contests I would have so many tied for first. A wonderful poem Paul!
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Date: 12/4/2014 8:08:00 AM
Thank you Maurice. I'm like you....I would not want to be a sole judge; I do not envy our sponsors for they have a hard job on their hands. cheers.// paul
Date: 12/3/2014 3:13:00 PM
Very nice perfumed words, Paul! Congratulations on your win. Sandra
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Date: 12/3/2014 3:49:00 PM
Thank you Sandra! your 'perfumed' comments are most welcome. // paul
Date: 12/3/2014 10:28:00 AM
paul, you scented this superb work with a whiff.. chanel!... okay, you win!.. thanks for being part of my contest with shining congrats!
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Date: 12/3/2014 12:49:00 PM
Thank you Nette! I did try to attract you with perfumed words! I wonder what you would have said had I entered my other muzette...Prayer, instead! // paul
Date: 12/3/2014 9:43:00 AM
I'm glad after you lost sleep over this contest Nette chose this for the winners list. Congratulations on your win Paul.
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Date: 12/3/2014 12:44:00 PM
Hi Brenda! In the end I tossed a coin ... felt sorry for the other one though! Thank you. // paul
Date: 12/3/2014 9:33:00 AM
Dropping back with my congrats Paul - it is a delight to read these poems again:-) Hugs Jan xx
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 12/3/2014 1:08:00 PM
Aww likewise Paul :-) Hugs jan xxx
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Paul Callus
Date: 12/3/2014 12:41:00 PM
Thank you Jan; it is lovely to be on the same winners' list with you. Hugs // paul
Date: 12/1/2014 3:09:00 AM
Your last three lines could almost run solo as a haiku. You took care of what little words you had at your disposal. Enjoyed the muse.
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Paul Callus
Date: 12/2/2014 3:24:00 PM
Hi Timothy...you enjoyed the muse...I enjoyed the comments! Thanks. // paul
Date: 11/28/2014 2:59:00 PM
Perfection, it brings to mind those sexy commercials.
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Paul Callus
Date: 11/29/2014 4:25:00 PM
Thank you Richard...yes, those 'sexy' commercials have a lot to do with it! // paul
Date: 11/28/2014 1:26:00 PM
smiling paul really very beautifully painted scent
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Paul Callus
Date: 11/29/2014 4:26:00 PM
Glad to see you smiling Liam!! Thank you for reading and commenting positively. // paul
Date: 11/28/2014 1:28:00 AM
aromatic musette :D!
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Date: 11/28/2014 4:11:00 AM
Hmmm smells nice! Wonder which your fav one is! :) // paul
Date: 11/27/2014 7:24:00 PM
Hmmm Chanel 5 ..I really like that one : ).Lovely poem Paul.
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Date: 11/28/2014 4:09:00 AM
Thank you Charm! Soon there will be the local airport open day; my family and I always go....lots of perfumes to chose from (apart from chocs and drinks); makes a lovely evening out. // paul
Date: 11/27/2014 5:14:00 PM
Dear Paul: Lovely read. Lovely write. Very nice when read out loud. All the best then, Leon.
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Date: 11/28/2014 4:12:00 AM
Thank you for reading and commenting, Leon. All the best to you, too! // paul
Date: 11/27/2014 12:59:00 PM
hmmmmmmmm......hmmmmmmmmm...... me likes.
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Paul Callus
Date: 11/27/2014 2:45:00 PM
Thank you Eileen. I have not entered this contest...as yet; waiting for feedback to help me make up my mind between this one and "Prayer".
Date: 11/27/2014 10:05:00 AM
Love the first one the most Paul! It's just perfect each word from deep within I heard! Sure to score high in contest too! Best wishes n an obvious 7.
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Date: 11/27/2014 11:26:00 AM
You are very kind, Upma; your comments give much satisfaction! Thank you!:) // paul
Date: 11/27/2014 2:16:00 AM
Fragrant scent runs deep :)) love this, Paul!
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hija de la luna
Date: 12/4/2014 2:44:00 AM
Big congrats, Paul! :)
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Paul Callus
Date: 11/27/2014 11:22:00 AM
Thank you Hija. Glad you like both fragrance and poem:) // paul
Date: 11/26/2014 9:49:00 PM
Smells in the air -- some are loud and foul, sharp and spicy, while others are soft and sweet -- this my friend is well penned and the aroma is intoxicating.
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Paul Callus
Date: 11/27/2014 10:18:00 AM
So pleased that you enjoyed the intoxicating aroma, David. Thank you for yet another most welcome visit. // paul
Date: 11/26/2014 7:31:00 PM
Paul, I love how you did yours...very lovely! I had such difficulty with this form. I agree with Jan, you've mastered it. Hugs, Rhonda
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Date: 11/27/2014 10:14:00 AM
Hi Rhonda...so pleased you like this Musette; I enjoyed reading yours...I think it's a winner! Hugs // paul
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