Paul Callus Poet Verse

Fragrant Whispers

Each word
           From deep within
           I heard

           Husky
           Inaudible;
           Musky

           The smell
           Of perfumed sighs
           Chanel.

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Form: Musette
Author: Paul Callus ~ 26 Nov 2014 
Contest: Whispers of a Muse
Sponsor: nette onclaud
Placed: 6th

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Susan Ashley November 27, 2017 at 8:34 PM A very seductive and sensual write Paul. Fragrant whispers with the intoxicated exhale of satisfaction.. stirring poetry my talented friend. Warmest wishes always ~Susan Paul Callus November 28, 2017 at 3:59 PM You never fail to read my poems from the outside and inside, Susan! Thank you my friend. ~ Warm regards // paul

Eileen Manassian January 3, 2016 at 5:17 PM I see I've been here before, Paul....lovely write!! Paul Callus January 4, 2016 at 1:22 PM Yes, you have been here before, Eileen, but any repeat visits from you are most welcome:) Hugs *~* paul

Andrea Dietrich December 15, 2014 at 3:29 PM I keep clicking on your poems and can't seem to find one I have not seen already. so back to this gem. I really liked it. May you have many more wins. Paul Callus December 15, 2014 at 3:48 PM Thank you for stopping by Andrea....I thought for a minute that you needed to borrow my Chanel:) goodnight.....paul

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders December 7, 2014 at 10:46 PM I loved this the first time I read it, Paul! Congrats to you...hugs, Rhonda Paul Callus December 8, 2014 at 5:26 AM Thank you Rhonda for coming back with congrats; much appreciated. // paul

Kayod5 Kayode December 6, 2014 at 11:40 PM Congrats on the win Paul,this hits it again...huggs Paul Callus December 7, 2014 at 2:52 PM Many thanks Kayod5. Hope you had a lovely weekend. // paul

Joseph May December 6, 2014 at 8:01 PM Very nicely penned Paul...Congrats on the win Paul Callus December 7, 2014 at 2:49 PM Thank you Joseph; comments and visit are appreciated. // paul

Robert Lindley December 6, 2014 at 10:50 AM Evokes whispers of love and mystery to me. All the ingredients for a romantic tryst or long and deep relationship. Very clever and bravo on your win!! Solid 7 from me.. Paul Callus December 6, 2014 at 3:35 PM Very uplifting feedback, my friend. Thank you for stopping by once again with congrats and a high rating. // paul

Andrea Dietrich December 4, 2014 at 7:27 PM very nice, Paul. I Just adore CHanel too!! Congrats. Paul Callus December 5, 2014 at 4:02 PM Thank you Andrea; I love the smell, too!

Dr. Upma A. Sharma December 4, 2014 at 4:45 AM And back again wid big congrats on ur awesome write Paul! Paul Callus December 4, 2014 at 8:11 AM Thank you for stopping by again with congrats, Upma! Have a nice day! // paul

Maurice Yvonne December 3, 2014 at 3:53 PM So very creative as always. I really don't know how they can judge these there are so many wonderful writes. It is why I do not do contests I would have so many tied for first. A wonderful poem Paul! Paul Callus December 4, 2014 at 8:08 AM Thank you Maurice. I'm like you....I would not want to be a sole judge; I do not envy our sponsors for they have a hard job on their hands. cheers.// paul

Sandra Haight December 3, 2014 at 3:13 PM Very nice perfumed words, Paul! Congratulations on your win. Sandra Paul Callus December 3, 2014 at 3:49 PM Thank you Sandra! your 'perfumed' comments are most welcome. // paul

Nette Onclaud December 3, 2014 at 10:28 AM paul, you scented this superb work with a whiff.. chanel!... okay, you win!.. thanks for being part of my contest with shining congrats! Paul Callus December 3, 2014 at 12:49 PM Thank you Nette! I did try to attract you with perfumed words! I wonder what you would have said had I entered my other muzette...Prayer, instead! // paul

Brenda Meier-Hans December 3, 2014 at 9:43 AM I'm glad after you lost sleep over this contest Nette chose this for the winners list. Congratulations on your win Paul. Paul Callus December 3, 2014 at 12:44 PM Hi Brenda! In the end I tossed a coin ... felt sorry for the other one though! Thank you. // paul

Jan Allison December 3, 2014 at 9:33 AM Dropping back with my congrats Paul - it is a delight to read these poems again:-) Hugs Jan xx Jan Allison December 3, 2014 at 1:08 PM Aww likewise Paul :-) Hugs jan xxx Paul Callus December 3, 2014 at 12:41 PM Thank you Jan; it is lovely to be on the same winners' list with you. Hugs // paul

Timothy Hicks December 1, 2014 at 3:09 AM Your last three lines could almost run solo as a haiku. You took care of what little words you had at your disposal. Enjoyed the muse. Paul Callus December 2, 2014 at 3:24 PM Hi Timothy...you enjoyed the muse...I enjoyed the comments! Thanks. // paul

Richard Lamoureux November 28, 2014 at 2:59 PM Perfection, it brings to mind those sexy commercials. Paul Callus November 29, 2014 at 4:25 PM Thank you Richard...yes, those 'sexy' commercials have a lot to do with it! // paul

Liam Mcdaid November 28, 2014 at 1:26 PM smiling paul really very beautifully painted scent Paul Callus November 29, 2014 at 4:26 PM Glad to see you smiling Liam!! Thank you for reading and commenting positively. // paul

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser November 28, 2014 at 1:28 AM aromatic musette :D! Paul Callus November 28, 2014 at 4:11 AM Hmmm smells nice! Wonder which your fav one is! :) // paul

Charmaine Chircop November 27, 2014 at 7:24 PM Hmmm Chanel 5 ..I really like that one : ).Lovely poem Paul. Paul Callus November 28, 2014 at 4:09 AM Thank you Charm! Soon there will be the local airport open day; my family and I always go....lots of perfumes to chose from (apart from chocs and drinks); makes a lovely evening out. // paul

Leon Enriquez November 27, 2014 at 5:14 PM Dear Paul: Lovely read. Lovely write. Very nice when read out loud. All the best then, Leon. Paul Callus November 28, 2014 at 4:12 AM Thank you for reading and commenting, Leon. All the best to you, too! // paul

Eileen Manassian November 27, 2014 at 12:59 PM hmmmmmmmm......hmmmmmmmmm...... me likes. Paul Callus November 27, 2014 at 2:45 PM Thank you Eileen. I have not entered this contest...as yet; waiting for feedback to help me make up my mind between this one and "Prayer".

Dr. Upma A. Sharma November 27, 2014 at 10:05 AM Love the first one the most Paul! It's just perfect each word from deep within I heard! Sure to score high in contest too! Best wishes n an obvious 7. Paul Callus November 27, 2014 at 11:26 AM You are very kind, Upma; your comments give much satisfaction! Thank you!:) // paul

Hija De La Luna November 27, 2014 at 2:16 AM Fragrant scent runs deep :)) love this, Paul! Hija De La Luna December 4, 2014 at 2:44 AM Big congrats, Paul! :) Paul Callus November 27, 2014 at 11:22 AM Thank you Hija. Glad you like both fragrance and poem:) // paul

David Meade November 26, 2014 at 9:49 PM Smells in the air -- some are loud and foul, sharp and spicy, while others are soft and sweet -- this my friend is well penned and the aroma is intoxicating. Paul Callus November 27, 2014 at 10:18 AM So pleased that you enjoyed the intoxicating aroma, David. Thank you for yet another most welcome visit. // paul

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders November 26, 2014 at 7:31 PM Paul, I love how you did yours...very lovely! I had such difficulty with this form. I agree with Jan, you've mastered it. Hugs, Rhonda Paul Callus November 27, 2014 at 10:14 AM Hi Rhonda...so pleased you like this Musette; I enjoyed reading yours...I think it's a winner! Hugs // paul

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