Fragrant the Petals

Fragrant the petals Time moves so quickly the sun comes to play Caressing my thoughts on this cold winter day Soon it will follow the path of my dreams While looking for flowers along gentle streams A dozen or more by the waters a’ flow Fragrant the petals this morning to show That this day is special as one I do care Is waiting my poem, my words here to share For she says she’s never it’s hard to believe A Valentine message her heart to receive So here I have penned her a wondrous bouquet Of poetic flowers so that I may say You’ve touched me in ways I have not known before Inspired my smile, my laughter and more So now I must ask you if that would be fine If you would agree to be my Valentine
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Jones Avatar
October 6, 2021 at 11:57 PM
Very romantic
Green Avatar
October 7, 2021 at 2:43 PM
Thanks...Me and Valentine's Day...oh and thanks so much for reading my short story. I didn't think anyone could find those things. I cannot reply to your comment there
Chiri Avatar
August 30, 2019 at 2:18 PM
Haha again I remember you writing this! Lol still the first valentines I ever got! But let me stop strolling and get my behind up and go check out some cars! Again have a great weekend!;)
Green Avatar
August 30, 2019 at 2:56 PM
I don't need to delete it, it was my gift to you and that is what it will remain. Thank you so much once again.
Chiri Avatar
August 30, 2019 at 2:18 PM
Oh you can delete this if you wish!;)
Mcgee Avatar
August 22, 2019 at 10:45 PM
this is a wonderful package of care...how could she say no? Well rhymed too!
Green Avatar
August 23, 2019 at 7:24 AM
Thanks Jeanne, I appreciate your kind words today
Adams Avatar
August 22, 2019 at 3:06 PM
you have a way of gracing the page with such beauty and then drawing the reader in and making them feel the emotion in the words....beautifully penned poem!
Green Avatar
August 23, 2019 at 7:24 AM
Thank you Sandra. I am happy you liked this one. It was written for a friend.
Marcum Wong Avatar
August 8, 2019 at 2:59 PM
Come back to us Chris. We miss your wonderful verses. xxoo
Green Avatar
August 22, 2019 at 3:23 PM
Hi Connie, I know you won't see this but I have come back for a little while Thank you for your kindness.
Roper Avatar
August 5, 2019 at 9:17 AM
A beautiful Valentine's verse, she would love and cherish... Hugs Eve
Green Avatar
August 22, 2019 at 3:23 PM
Thank you Eve.
Bavington  Avatar
July 3, 2019 at 1:15 PM
This is so filled with imagery, emotion and feeling. I hope she said yes.
Godwin Avatar
July 2, 2019 at 8:25 AM
I have missed you and sensed you while longing for more of the above and the knowledge that you and your world are okay. Please be okay, or even better. Your still pen leaves a gap full of longing here on Soup but be and do as you need be and do, just know you're thought of. Poetry hugs ... CayCay
Green Avatar
July 2, 2019 at 4:12 PM
Thank you CayCay. Your nice comment has made my day.
Rodrigues Avatar
April 29, 2019 at 6:59 AM
A beauty of a poem!
Braithwaite Avatar
April 20, 2019 at 3:49 PM
Lovely
Marcum Wong Avatar
April 17, 2019 at 2:27 PM
I hope you return soon Chris. You are greatly missed. Have a lovely Easter my friend. xxoo
Daniel Avatar
March 12, 2019 at 3:12 AM
Lovely Valentine she must be to inspire this beautiful poem, Chris:)
Kamoonpuri Avatar
March 8, 2019 at 1:58 PM
Im a flower lover so I liked this charming poem, awesomely rhymed and appealing in romantic sweet entreating. Kudos. So nice to read from u again, Pleez do comment my newest poem too.
Marcum Wong Avatar
March 4, 2019 at 5:44 PM
Posies for your Valentine shine in this romantic tender piece Chris. I always enjoy reading your uplifting poetry. Thank you! : ) xxoo
Nicole Avatar
February 26, 2019 at 10:49 AM
Soft, sweet and romantic. This is beautiful. Wonderful thoughts from your heart. :) Brandy
Wise Avatar
February 22, 2019 at 8:58 AM
This is very beautiful. Such gentle flow and rhyme. :)
Kucharek Avatar
February 20, 2019 at 2:32 AM
So very beautiful! Lucky woman!
Romano Avatar
February 18, 2019 at 10:47 AM
What a beautiful Valentine poem!
Chircop Avatar
February 17, 2019 at 12:47 PM
How sweet and lovely this is..If it was more than words I'm sure she said yes.:)
Bauer Avatar
February 14, 2019 at 4:46 PM
very tender and touching, chris!
Kitchin Avatar
February 14, 2019 at 11:20 AM
Beautifully penned Chris!
Sands Avatar
February 14, 2019 at 10:40 AM
Great to see your poetry again Chris. This is special and beautifully written :)
Wanter Avatar
February 14, 2019 at 10:23 AM
I know you had someone in mind when you wrote this, and they are very fortunate, indeed. As for me, it is beautiful, and I'm glad to see you back.
Cunningham Avatar
February 14, 2019 at 7:51 AM
Lovely romantic verse Chris. Welcome back. Tom.
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