Fragrance of Life

Fragrance of Life  ©

Cool rain drums on blistering 
asphalt, the scent streams into 
the nostrils--hot, grassy smell of 
summer, freshly cut-smoky 
cedar lingers on the air 

Fresh popcorn drenched in 
butter, I sit in the dark, musty 
movie house. Childhood 
memories of Tom Mix dashing 
across the screen 

A breath, deep of rain-damp wool, 
heady peat of whiskey 
neat. Old butt-imprinted leather 
and the dusty, pulpy smell of a 
well thumbed book as the page 
is turned 

 
The mule drawn plow turns the 
rich, boggy earth beneath an 
autumn sky. With luck and some 
rain the larder is full at harvest 
time 

Wrapped in strong arms, nose 
pressed to warm skin smelling of 
soap and outdoors. Drinking the 
heat in with the smell of the 
man, your man 

Sweet puppy breath. Pure 
doggy conviction that you will 
love him as much as he loves 
you 

 
Candles and incense in the 
great cathedral… the heart fills 
with faith, hope, and 
expectation 

Soft curls, sweet skin, the babe 
squirms closer… powdery 
newness, innocence, and trust

Briny, sharp tang of the northern 
sea. Balmy, yielding, essence 
under the Southern Cross 

Green aftertaste, fishy decay 
and salty fresh scent of the 
clean-swept beach 
 
Sultry air twines itself through the 
Quarter, crushed sugar, wet 
pavement, yeasty bouquet of 
hot beignet. Warm beer, 
praline sweet, heady grape 

Old river water slugs along 

Stifling, coppery smell of blood 
be it the battle field, hospital, 
crime scene, butcher shop, or 

birthing room… 
Cloys In the nostrils sticks in the 
back of the throat like old 
mucus 

 
Icy sweetness of winter air, 
frigid sting of snow to come… 
sharp pine tantalizes the senses, 
as harsh breath smokes the air 


Steaming manure in fresh straw, 
roasted peanuts, pink spun 
sugary sweet… 
the pungent animals stalk the 
cage. Sawdust under old 
canvas glows like old gold in a 
shaft of sun light. 
The Big Top! 
Childhood rushes back 


The smell of her on your 
mustache… you don’t want to 
wash your face… lose the 
heady scent of her love 

 
New trees struggle to rise above 
a sea of old petroleum. 
Pine sol lies still on the cold tiles, 
stale baloney on old bread. 
Rancid tired clothes reek of 
cheap cologne
The truck belches halitosis 

Move on down the highway 


Sharp fall gusts through the 
quaking aspen, 
pitchy sap barks in the 
crackling fire, 
snowy air assaults the senses 

The loon sings, warming the 
heart. 

Trisha Sugarek
Butterflies and Bullets
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Arnone Avatar
June 1, 2016 at 9:48 PM
Superbly crafted word images -- descriptive, picturesque and imaginative.
Sugarek Avatar
June 2, 2016 at 6:32 AM
I appreciate your generous words, Tom.
Toil Avatar
April 10, 2014 at 10:57 AM
A fascinating mélange of sensual experiences. Your poem reads like a mosaic -- never tiring us by lingering too long on a particular stimulation. Every line is fresh and invigorating. Read carefully, we actually smell the "stale baloney on old bread" or hear the "pitchy sap barking in the crackling fire". Thank you so much for sharing, Trisha.
Sugarek Avatar
April 10, 2014 at 11:23 AM
Thanks, Sam. What a lovely critique. Trish
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