Fragments of First Love

“Fragments of the first experience ever remain in air” ~ By poet
Sits above uncle wearing his preacher's hat; Sits her Mom below with a vacant praise; She for whom he sighs stands beside, Digging the floor with toes, With bruised eyes, to bury newly flumed virgin love, And he beholds the scene through a keyhole. For years hatched he a golden egg of love in soul, And twelve moons ago, he let go his dove, And she held it like a primrose, And nursed their love with pride. But softly she sobs here; his crafty uncle lays Traps and purrs as if he played with a gnat. Scene he zooms in, and rattles like a frightened rat. His uncle's mockery smothers his gaze, And through the landscape, turned upside Down, he views how she goes Like a beaten dove, gazing vacantly above, Interring her love, wearing a black shawl.
Jan. 18, 2021 (originally posted on Jan. 4, 2021) COMPLETELY YOUR CHOICE (44)any form any theme Poetry Contes Contest sponsor: Brian Strand Syllables: 12/10/8/6/12/10 in each stanza: Ref. howmanysyllables.com A 3rd Place in the following contest (judged on Jan. Jan. 16, 2021) Jan. 4, 2021 A Little Memory - My Invented Form - Poetry Contest Contest Sponsor: Constance La France

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Date: 1/19/2021 2:43:00 PM
Expressive and emotive winner. Congrats. Sara
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Newton Ranaweera
Date: 1/19/2021 3:53:00 PM
Thank you so much, Sara, for this impressively beautiful comment and the congrats!!
Date: 1/19/2021 12:12:00 PM
Newton, congratulations on your win in my contest, A Little Memory using my invented Rhyme form _Constance
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Date: 1/19/2021 1:57:00 PM
Thank you so much, Constance, for the congrats!!
Date: 1/4/2021 3:38:00 PM
Hello Newton, A beautiful poem about the first love. Enjoy your evening my friend.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 1/6/2021 7:54:00 AM
You are welcome Newton my friend. Enjoy your day.
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Newton Ranaweera
Date: 1/4/2021 3:55:00 PM
Thank you so much, Darlene, for your visit, read and for this impressively lovely comment. Enjoy your evening, too, my friend!!
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