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This life is but one of many -- for I am a many, experiencing as one; This love is all love in one -- while greater love is the many, loving as one -- time is a certain time, with innate memory of when time was timeless, as the soul re-forms for it yearns -- rejoining the many, recalling all the many, that the many~ is our blessed one --

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Victor Buhagiar

Date: 6/24/2024 5:29:00 AM

Our life is so short, we can possibly experience all, but we try. Blessings.

Joe Dimino
Date: 6/24/2024 6:17:00 AM

Hi Victor; it may depend simply on what we call life...how we perceive time -- one thing is for certain in my opinion~ that which we declare in our minds and hearts we will have. Pure love is omnipotent.

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 6/23/2024 9:52:00 PM

This is a beautiful poem.

Joe Dimino
Date: 6/24/2024 6:17:00 AM

Thank you, Hilda; I could not ask for a more encouraging comment. Blessings my friend.

Silent One

Date: 6/22/2024 8:20:00 AM

Hey Joe... This poem is a beautifully crafted meditation on the interconnectedness of life, love, and time. Its spiritual and philosophical themes invite readers to reflect on their own existence and their place within the larger tapestry of the universe. The elegant simplicity of the language enhances its profound message, making it a thought-provoking and deeply moving piece.

Joe Dimino
Date: 6/23/2024 9:36:00 AM

Thank you, Si; blessings for having taken the time to analyze this work. Have a wonderful day!

Ink Empress

Date: 6/22/2024 6:59:00 AM

What a soulful and seamless write this is, woven in such a heartfelt manner . I love the flow of your words as well as how youv written “This love is all love in one -- while greater love is the many,” deep and so thought provoking too! Pleasure always reading your poems. Sending you light

Joe Dimino
Date: 6/23/2024 9:37:00 AM

Living words my intent -- perhaps I have succeeded here in a small way. Blessings my friend@

Valsa George

Date: 6/21/2024 9:41:00 PM

"as the soul re-forms for it yearns -- rejoining the many," Our life here is just a fragment, waiting completion, passing through many stages. The evolution will be complete as we merge with the Universal Spirit, we call God. Joe your presentation of thoughts is ever unique, with deep layers of meaning.

Joe Dimino
Date: 6/23/2024 9:39:00 AM

You have the blessed light of mystical India -- multi dimensional being. Thank you, Valsa; I hope your vacation was wonderful.

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 6/21/2024 3:48:00 AM

The more lifetimes we have had the more we truly understand the meaning of altogether as one. I can see you have a full grasp on the subject here, gl int he contest

Joe Dimino
Date: 6/21/2024 3:57:00 AM

Hi Vie; full as I can at this stage of my evolution. I am certain that there are wonders, yet to be experienced, that I cannot even begin to fathom -- my brain would explode:) All in God's time. Same text but I changed the presentation form. Blessings my friend.