Fragmented Dream

The forest was lush green and dripping of moss and rain,
Glittering glass streams meandered past dark foliage and trees;
          And wild flowers dropped their petals into the water,
Where they drifted down waterfalls into sapphire blue lakes.

     I listened deeply to the rippling water kissing the wet rocks,
And the forest was loudly chirping and breathing and beckoning me;
          Then I heard my name being called from a faraway place,
It undulated in the tangled branches and whispered on the wind.

     The voice called my name over and over and I ran towards it,
My sobbing a loud moaning wail lost in the vast forest and streams;
           And it was dark night, the blue sky had withered away,
The stars trembled as I ran through the maze, calling out for mother . . .
            
                                                                  Then, I awoke, weeping.

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November 4, 2013 


Poetry/Verse/Fragmented Dream
Copyright Protected, ID 11-517-299-04
All Rights Reserved, 2013, Constance La FRance

Submitted to the Premier contest, Mid August 2018
sponsor, Brian Strand, Judged 2018

Fourth Place

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Featured poem - February 23, 2014
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Written for the contest, Poem of the Week, 
Sponsor, Poet Destroyer,  Judged 2013

Honourable Mention

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 8/12/2018 7:44:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. Well done!
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Date: 8/12/2018 7:41:00 PM
Fantastic imagery,Dear Heart a.k.a. Broken Wings, congratulations on an excellent win! Hugs Eve
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Date: 8/11/2018 10:33:00 PM
Such a beautiful write with breathtaking imagery. Congrats on your win in the contest!! ~ Gershon
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Date: 8/11/2018 9:07:00 PM
Congrats on your win, DH. A touching poem with awesome imagery.
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Date: 8/11/2018 6:11:00 PM
Congrats. Sara
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Date: 2/21/2014 11:22:00 PM
Constance, this is written well... To remember the fragments of a dream is a premonition scheme to perplex the mind into thinking... Good work... Verlena
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Date: 2/21/2014 10:15:00 PM
Dear Constance, this gorgeous one is being featured at Soup this week. Congrats. I just love this.
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Date: 2/17/2014 10:57:00 AM
Connie this I love so poignantly written kudos congrats on being featured hugs
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Date: 11/17/2013 3:12:00 AM
Broken, , Congratulations & thank you for supporting my contest... always ~LINDA~
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Date: 11/4/2013 3:46:00 PM
wonderful write here, Constance
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Date: 11/4/2013 2:46:00 PM
This is a tremendous and enlightening write my friend! I truly loved reading this amazing poem this afternoon! What a brilliant piece, you have surely put me into your dream with you while I read this poem, Great Work!!
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