Fragmented Dream

The forest was lush green and dripping of moss and rain,
Glittering glass streams meandered past dark foliage and trees;
          And wild flowers dropped their petals into the water,
Where they drifted down waterfalls into sapphire blue lakes.

     I listened deeply to the rippling water kissing the wet rocks,
And the forest was loudly chirping and breathing and beckoning me;
          Then I heard my name being called from a faraway place,
It undulated in the tangled branches and whispered on the wind.

     The voice called my name over and over and I ran towards it,
My sobbing a loud moaning wail lost in the vast forest and streams;
           And it was dark night, the blue sky had withered away,
The stars trembled as I ran through the maze, calling out for mother . . .
            
                                                                  Then, I awoke, weeping.

_______________________________
November 4, 2013 


Poetry/Verse/Fragmented Dream
Copyright Protected, ID 11-517-299-04
All Rights Reserved, 2013, Constance La FRance

Submitted to the Premier contest, Mid August 2018
sponsor, Brian Strand, Judged 2018

Fourth Place

________________________________
Featured poem - February 23, 2014
________________________________

Written for the contest, Poem of the Week, 
Sponsor, Poet Destroyer,  Judged 2013

Honourable Mention
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Gentry Avatar
August 12, 2018 at 7:44 PM
Congratulations on your win. Well done!
Roper Avatar
August 12, 2018 at 7:41 PM
Fantastic imagery,Dear Heart a.k.a. Broken Wings, congratulations on an excellent win! Hugs Eve
Wolf Avatar
August 11, 2018 at 10:33 PM
Such a beautiful write with breathtaking imagery. Congrats on your win in the contest!! ~ Gershon
Gauthier Avatar
August 11, 2018 at 9:07 PM
Congrats on your win, DH. A touching poem with awesome imagery.
Kendrick Avatar
August 11, 2018 at 6:11 PM
Congrats. Sara
Walker  Avatar
February 21, 2014 at 11:22 PM
Constance, this is written well... To remember the fragments of a dream is a premonition scheme to perplex the mind into thinking... Good work... Verlena
Dietrich Avatar
February 21, 2014 at 10:15 PM
Dear Constance, this gorgeous one is being featured at Soup this week. Congrats. I just love this.
Hamilton Avatar
February 17, 2014 at 10:57 AM
Connie this I love so poignantly written kudos congrats on being featured hugs
A   Avatar
November 17, 2013 at 3:12 AM
Broken, , Congratulations & thank you for supporting my contest... always ~LINDA~
Horne Avatar
November 4, 2013 at 3:46 PM
wonderful write here, Constance
Sivey Avatar
November 4, 2013 at 2:46 PM
This is a tremendous and enlightening write my friend! I truly loved reading this amazing poem this afternoon! What a brilliant piece, you have surely put me into your dream with you while I read this poem, Great Work!!
Get a Premium Membership
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Diverse Voices: The Poetry of Human Rights and the Pursuit of Peace