Fragility

A beautiful glass vase
Must be handled with care
Made with love,
Without a blemish or tear.

The glazier takes pride.
As he fashions the glass,
He always tries
To make each one
As perfect as the last.

When the glass is complete,
And out of the glazier's hands
It looks like a treat
As it graciously stands,
On an antique table
That stood in the hall
Dusted carefully,
In case it may fall

What has fate in store
For this exquisite glassware
Who could ask for more
Created without a flaw.

Fine glass is very fragile,
It easily breaks
It is a unique commodity
A lot of courage it takes.
To survive.
And keep alive.
Maybe one day in the future
It will come to pass,
That all living creatures
Are as fragile as glass.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Rodrigues Avatar
April 18, 2023 at 10:40 AM
Congratulations on POTD!
George Avatar
April 17, 2023 at 10:41 PM
The conclusion of your poem generates a lot of thought. We are all fragile like pieces of glass likely to break unless handled with care. Beautiful analogy. Congratulations Shirley on your POTD
Nicole Avatar
April 17, 2023 at 8:17 PM
Life is fragile, and your words express this so beautifully, Shirley. "A lot of courage it takes to survive. This thought touches my heart so deeply, because it holds so much truth. Like glass, we break so easily. Congratulations my dear friend, on Poem of the Day. Many wonderful blessings to you. Hugs, Brandy
Chuuk Avatar
April 17, 2023 at 7:37 PM
So beautiful! Congratulations on your POTD, Shirley. :)
McBride  Avatar
April 17, 2023 at 2:37 PM
The glazier is willing to give all the same process of purifying, many just reject the removing of the impurities which make it bond and shine,. Love your poem and Congratulations on POTD
Hawkins Avatar
April 17, 2023 at 4:56 PM
Thank you, Stephan. Take care, Shirley
Goldsmith Avatar
April 17, 2023 at 10:50 AM
Congratulations on your POTD win. Have a very blessed day/week......................
Hawkins Avatar
April 17, 2023 at 4:58 PM
Thank you, Paula I hope you have a pleasant, peaceful day, too Take care, Shirley
Kauffman Avatar
April 17, 2023 at 9:23 AM
What a marvelous metaphoric write Shirley cast with beautiful imagery. You really drew me into the creation of the vase and set the scene where this marvelous work is displayed. Congratulations on your POTD! Blessings.
Hawkins Avatar
April 17, 2023 at 5:01 PM
Thank you, Sam, for your kind and encouraging comments. Take care. Shirley
Wolf Avatar
April 17, 2023 at 8:11 AM
There you go, Shirley! Excellent choice for POTD. Congrats! ~ Gershon
Hawkins Avatar
April 17, 2023 at 5:04 PM
Thank you, Gershon Take care, Shirley
Kitchin Avatar
April 17, 2023 at 8:07 AM
Shirley, a wonderful poem and message, congratulations on POTD!
Hawkins Avatar
April 17, 2023 at 5:05 PM
Thank you, Tania, t was a lovely surprise. Take care, Shirley
Baker Avatar
April 17, 2023 at 7:18 AM
Congratulations on your POTD, Shirley! It is true, we humans are as vunerable or as fragile as fine crafted glass. A little loving care is all that is needed to let them shine. Have a blessed day, my friend. Bill
Hawkins Avatar
April 17, 2023 at 5:08 PM
Thank you, Bill, I am a little overwhelmed by POTD and the very kind comments. I hope all is well with you and your family. Take care, Shirley
Sands Avatar
April 17, 2023 at 6:42 AM
Congratulations for POTD. Beautiful Shirley :)
Hawkins Avatar
April 17, 2023 at 5:12 PM
OOOH! Thank you, Heidi. I hope all is well with you and yours. Take care, Shirley
Edmonds  Avatar
April 17, 2023 at 6:35 AM
A wonderful write Shirley - Hearts alike fragile glass can easily shatter, kindness, care and compassion truly do matter. Congratulations on receiving the honour of poem of the day… Belle
Hawkins Avatar
April 17, 2023 at 5:14 PM
Thank you, Belle I love your rhyming comments. I hope you are enjoying your day. Take care, Shirley
Fowler Avatar
April 17, 2023 at 6:07 AM
Congrats on POTD Shirley! :)
Hawkins Avatar
April 17, 2023 at 5:10 PM
Thank you, Linda It was a lovely surprise. I hope you are having a pleasant day. Take care, Shirley
May Avatar
April 17, 2023 at 5:08 AM
Very nicely penned, Congrats on POTD
Hawkins Avatar
April 17, 2023 at 5:17 PM
Thank you, Joseph I was surprised and honoured to receive it. I hope you are enjoying your day. Take care, Shirley
Turner Avatar
April 17, 2023 at 5:00 AM
Congratulations Shirley on POTD honors.
Hawkins Avatar
April 17, 2023 at 5:19 PM
Thank you, Daniel. It was a big surprise. Thank you for your encouraging comments. Take care, Old Duck
Ray Choudhury Avatar
April 17, 2023 at 4:54 AM
"That all living creatures Are as fragile as glass." I am moved by the ending couplet. Your poem is so original and unique! Congratulations on POTD. BW ~ Mala
Hawkins Avatar
April 17, 2023 at 5:22 PM
Thank you, Mala I am so pleased that you enjoyed the poem. It was lovely to hear from you. Take care, Shirley
Gentile Avatar
April 17, 2023 at 4:00 AM
Shirley, your words are as beautiful as that fragile class. Congratulations on your POTD!! Enjoy your day xxoo
Hawkins Avatar
April 17, 2023 at 5:26 PM
Thank you, Mike I was surprised and honoured to receive POTD. Your comment is beautiful too, and much appreciated. Take care, Shirley X
Andresen Avatar
April 17, 2023 at 1:52 AM
- Handle with care... congratulations on your great p.o.t.d., Shirley :) - hugs
Hawkins Avatar
April 17, 2023 at 5:33 PM
Thank you, Sunshine; the older we get, the more we realise how fragile life is and handle it with care and consideration. Thank you, Sunshine, for your caring hug, Sending you one too, Shirley
M  Avatar
April 17, 2023 at 12:56 AM
Yes!!!! Mrs Shirley Hawkins you got POTD! Congratulations and well deserved my lovely friend. This is an excellent poem so well written and meaningful…..the last four lines ends and sums it up beautifully! So happy for you! Debx
Hawkins Avatar
April 17, 2023 at 5:40 PM
It was a total surprise, Deb. I feel very honoured to receive it, as many accomplished Poets are on PS. I have found it difficult to write lately. Life is precious and fragile. Thank you for your continued support, Deb. Take care, Shirley
Meadows Avatar
April 16, 2023 at 10:33 PM
A good poem. Well written.
Hawkins Avatar
April 17, 2023 at 5:44 PM
Thank you, Jeanette. It was a surprise to receive it. It was very nice of you to comment. I hope all is well with you and that you are having a good week. Take care, Shirley
Rodrigues Avatar
April 16, 2023 at 7:52 PM
Wow! Great write!
Hawkins Avatar
April 16, 2023 at 8:24 PM
WOW! Thank you, Kim. Take care, Shirley
Wolf Avatar
April 16, 2023 at 6:58 PM
Fragile human! Handle with Care! (Already here, I daresay).
Hawkins Avatar
April 16, 2023 at 9:15 PM
I think so.
Theraven Avatar
April 16, 2023 at 6:34 PM
Shirley, So easy to break, much harder to make. This poem is a marvelous commodity in fragile glass worked words. A Fave! -Richard
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