Fragile Spirit

Loneliness casts vague shadows,
gray mist clouds my mind.
Confused, my heart follows,
a path, that is undefined.

Can I see what is in front of me?
Or do I see what is not there?
Are my decisions based on reality,
or am I totally unaware?

Sadness dwells within my lonely heart,
wrapped in memories of the past.
So entwined, they refuse to part,
hiding in the darkness they cast

Feelings, a wary enemy to battle.
I pray inner strength will remain
Though I am weary, my spirit fragile,
its my freedom that I fight to retain.

Through the dark, I struggle on,
seeking the light of tomorrow.
Will I still be standing at dawn,
or fall into the shadows of sorrow?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023



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Date: 5/16/2023 5:57:00 PM
You've lost focus, on this one. If you plan on going forward, you got to quit looking back.
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Date: 1/20/2023 3:38:00 PM
Well expressed again. I see your strength through any pain. Wishing you healing and wellness :)
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Date: 1/19/2023 10:49:00 AM
I feel at times we all get lost in those dark places especially after the past few years but there is hope and there is light in this world. love phyl
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Date: 1/18/2023 9:33:00 AM
I've been in that dark place, so I feel your loneliness, the feeling of being lost. Keep moving and things will brighten up for you, Sandra.
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Date: 1/17/2023 6:42:00 AM
What a sad state of affairs , but well explained. Interestingly, I’ve encountered quite a number of similarly sad/hopeless situations on PS recent new poems. Could it be the effect of January blues or some such ? Anyway, hopefully your words aren’t true to life but merely a figment of your poetic imagination. Well written lines perfectly describing the mood.
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