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Fragile Promises

Promises are not like diamonds or steel. Many times, they cannot be perceived to be real. They appear to be soft, and without mass. Often, they can shatter like thin glass. Those were like the promises you made to me. How they turned out to be perfunctory. Just like the darkness before the dawn, I closed my eyes, and you were gone.

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Date: 1/28/2021 1:26:00 PM
Very nice getting to know you,Robert, By the last line of this one, I could even feel my skin at the edge of shattering! Dynamic and precise. It came to me that we learn abt promises as we age & make fewer & fewer as decades Mount. Hugs on this to you. Love the similes & concise language use.
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Date: 1/27/2021 3:18:00 PM
WOW!!! I really enjoyed this write. "So True." I have read a number of your poems. Enjoy your day with blessings...........
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Date: 1/21/2021 4:19:00 PM
very sad, robert, but well written. ~ hope you're feeling better...
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