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Fragile Flakes

Fragile flakes weave a soft duvet of snow supplanting Fall colors with Winter white. And blustery breezes begin to blow: as a sullied sun slowly slips from sight to the honks of migrating geese in flight. Winter wails, amidst a flurry of flakes; Her crystalline aura, composed of ice. And She starts to freeze the rivers and lakes; holding life ransom, in cold's crushing vise: while awaiting Spring's warmth to meet her price. Fall colors get whitewashed across the land, Autumn lies buried beneath drifts of snow. And the naked trees, stripped of their leaves, stand barren, rooted to where nothing can grow: even though it used to, not long ago. A cold chill rides atop a frigid breeze: all the songbirds have long since flown away. And the temperature drops by degrees, till it is too cold to go out to play: and children are stranded indoors all day.
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Mcintosh Avatar
December 4, 2022 at 2:29 AM
Wonderful poem and example for your contest, Emile. Love it. God bless you. Love, Gina
Pinet Avatar
December 4, 2022 at 8:06 AM
Thanks, Regina, as always, I appreciate your comments, Merry Christmas my friend, Emile.
Daniel Avatar
November 30, 2022 at 9:16 PM
A nice, winter poem, Emile:)
Pinet Avatar
December 1, 2022 at 6:46 AM
Thanks, Jo, I appreciate it my friend, Emile.
Logan Avatar
January 20, 2022 at 11:25 AM
Wonderfully exposed are your wintry verses. Congratulations on your win, Emile..
Pinet Avatar
January 20, 2022 at 11:37 AM
Thanks, Jenna, as always, I appreciate your comments, my friend, Emile.
Allison Avatar
January 20, 2022 at 7:29 AM
your imagery is always exquisite Emile, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
Pinet Avatar
January 20, 2022 at 7:52 AM
Thanks, Jan, I appreciate all of your comments my friend, Emile
Calasibetta Avatar
January 20, 2022 at 4:31 AM
Emile congratulations on your win! Your poem, reeled in me, like a movie as the seasons moved in slow motion, each detail expressed with such grace. KUDOS! :)Paulette
Pinet Avatar
January 20, 2022 at 7:50 AM
Thanks, Paulette, always, I appreciate your comments, my friend, Emile.
Gondolf Avatar
January 20, 2022 at 2:48 AM
Congrats on your win, Emile, your wonderful imagery left me feeling winter’s chill. John
Pinet Avatar
January 20, 2022 at 7:49 AM
Thanks, John, I always appreciate your comments, my friend, Emile.
Marcum Wong Avatar
January 19, 2022 at 9:28 PM
Exquisite imagery in this winter poem Emile. Congratulations on your trophy win. Blessings xxoo
Pinet Avatar
January 20, 2022 at 7:48 AM
Thanks, Connie, I welcome and appreciate your comments, my friend, Emile.
Alex Avatar
January 19, 2022 at 8:34 PM
Very attractive title. Tumbling Flakes. The whole poem is beautiful. Congratulations!
Pinet Avatar
January 19, 2022 at 8:43 PM
Thanks, Christuraj, I appreciate your comments, they brought a smile to my day my friend, Emile.
Hankins Avatar
January 19, 2022 at 8:25 PM
Back to say "Congratulations" on your top spot in Francine's contest!
Pinet Avatar
January 19, 2022 at 8:42 PM
Thanks, Milt, I appreciate it my friend, Emile.
Roberts Avatar
January 19, 2022 at 8:02 PM
congrats on your win in my contest , you had a lot of great competition but tied for the top spot
Pinet Avatar
January 20, 2022 at 7:46 AM
Thanks, Francine, I appreciate the placement, my friend, Emile.
Rodrigues Avatar
January 19, 2022 at 7:14 PM
Lovely! Congratulations, Emile!
Pinet Avatar
January 19, 2022 at 8:41 PM
Thanks, Kim, I appreciate it my friend, Emile.
Agustin Avatar
January 19, 2022 at 6:51 PM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this... making me virtually experience wintry delight in my "winterless" country... though it's cold in our place now. God bless you.
Pinet Avatar
January 19, 2022 at 8:41 PM
Thanks, Beata, that's quite the compliment, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Poteet Avatar
January 19, 2022 at 6:42 PM
Lovely imagery, Emile. Congrats.
Pinet Avatar
January 19, 2022 at 8:39 PM
Thanks, Reason, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Peck Avatar
December 31, 2021 at 11:08 AM
Brrr. You describe Winter beautifully. Congratulation on your win~
Pinet Avatar
December 31, 2021 at 1:25 PM
Thanks, Ann, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Ibeh Avatar
December 30, 2021 at 1:51 PM
Heartiest congratulations on your win in Brian's contest, Emile:-) Stellar poem with great imagery!
Pinet Avatar
December 30, 2021 at 8:06 PM
Thanks, Edward, as always I appreciate your comments my friend, Happy New Year, Emile.
Kauffman Avatar
December 30, 2021 at 9:38 AM
Emile, congratulations and high fives for this lovely description of winter - even when it is too cold for the kids to go out and play. So many wonderful images my friend! Sending you warm wishes and joy for your new year!
Pinet Avatar
December 30, 2021 at 1:32 PM
Thanks, Sam, as always you bring a smile to my day my friend, Emile.
De Beaulieu Avatar
December 12, 2021 at 1:16 PM
Hello Emile, yes when it is too cold outside the children will not play. Just stay indoors to keep warm. enjoy your day my friend.
De Beaulieu Avatar
December 13, 2021 at 11:48 AM
Hello Emile, you are welcome my friend. Enjoy your day.
Pinet Avatar
December 13, 2021 at 7:04 AM
Thanks, Darlene, as always I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Hankins Avatar
December 12, 2021 at 11:24 AM
Emile, I love your images! Fantastic! I particularly liked the idea of winter whitewashing away the color. Such fine writing, my friend.
Pinet Avatar
December 12, 2021 at 12:24 PM
Thanks, Milt, you know how much I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
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