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Fragile Dreams

Images of broken dreams~ scattered along the pavement; Shall I pick them one by one, or simply walk barefooted over them? _______________________________ December 12, 2020 1st stanza of my poem, Images Liberum Divisa 3 Poetry Contest(Premiere) Sponsored by Gregory R. Barden 3rd place Entered for “All Yours( April 7) Poetry Contest Sponsored by Brian Strand

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Anisha Dutta

Date: 4/7/2021 9:46:00 PM

Congrats JCB on your win on both the Contests. The exceptional stanza deserves. Blessing. Anisha

Constance La France

Date: 2/18/2021 2:10:00 PM

JCB, congratulations on your win in Gregory's contest with this wonderful four lines _Constance

Anitha Jayasankar

Date: 2/17/2021 9:31:00 PM

I just loved this. You are SO imaginative and creative. These four lines speak a LOT. Am faving this. Congrats on your win dear JCB. From the comments below, I understood it was your birthday yesterday (Here, in India, 18th started). Belated birthday wishes dear. Hugs ~ Ani

Jcb Brul
Date: 2/18/2021 12:10:00 AM

Thank you dear Ani for the greetings and for the FAVE. I appreciate your visit. All the best..

Beata Agustin

Date: 2/17/2021 8:36:00 PM

Wow! Congrats! Delightful and delighting. God bless you.

Jcb Brul
Date: 2/18/2021 12:07:00 AM

Thank you Beata..More blessings!

Suzanne Delaney

Date: 2/17/2021 9:09:00 AM

Congratulations. Very moving....the thought of letting your feet be hurt by broken shards because you simply don’t care anymore. Did I read the intent right? Happy Birthday. SuZ

Jcb Brul
Date: 2/17/2021 6:24:00 PM

Hi SuZ..you captured the poem’s very core. Thank you for the warm greetings..All the best. _JCB

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/17/2021 6:51:00 AM

Those broken dreams are sometimes sad and sometimes happy if we really think about our lives and which way it could have gone if our dreams had come true. Congrats. Sara

Jcb Brul
Date: 2/17/2021 6:53:00 AM

Thank you for dropping by Sara! Happy to see you one more time.