JC Brul Poet Free verse

Fragile Dreams

Images of broken dreams~
   scattered along the pavement; 
          Shall I pick them one by one, 
or simply walk barefooted over them?
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December 12, 2020


1st stanza of my poem, Images
Liberum Divisa 3 Poetry Contest(Premiere)
Sponsored by Gregory R. Barden
3rd place 

Entered for “All Yours( April 7) Poetry Contest
Sponsored by Brian Strand

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Anisha Dutta April 7, 2021 at 9:46 PM Congrats JCB on your win on both the Contests. The exceptional stanza deserves. Blessing. Anisha

Constance La France February 18, 2021 at 2:10 PM JCB, congratulations on your win in Gregory's contest with this wonderful four lines _Constance

Anitha Jayasankar February 17, 2021 at 9:31 PM I just loved this. You are SO imaginative and creative. These four lines speak a LOT. Am faving this. Congrats on your win dear JCB. From the comments below, I understood it was your birthday yesterday (Here, in India, 18th started). Belated birthday wishes dear. Hugs ~ Ani JC Brul February 18, 2021 at 12:10 AM Thank you dear Ani for the greetings and for the FAVE. I appreciate your visit. All the best..

Beata Agustin February 17, 2021 at 8:36 PM Wow! Congrats! Delightful and delighting. God bless you. JC Brul February 18, 2021 at 12:07 AM Thank you Beata..More blessings!

Suzanne Delaney February 17, 2021 at 9:09 AM Congratulations. Very moving....the thought of letting your feet be hurt by broken shards because you simply don’t care anymore. Did I read the intent right? Happy Birthday. SuZ JC Brul February 17, 2021 at 6:24 PM Hi SuZ..you captured the poem’s very core. Thank you for the warm greetings..All the best. _JCB

Sara Kendrick February 17, 2021 at 6:51 AM Those broken dreams are sometimes sad and sometimes happy if we really think about our lives and which way it could have gone if our dreams had come true. Congrats. Sara JC Brul February 17, 2021 at 6:53 AM Thank you for dropping by Sara! Happy to see you one more time.

Line Gauthier February 17, 2021 at 6:40 AM beautiful, JCB ~ congrats JC Brul February 17, 2021 at 6:49 AM Thank you Line..A nice surprise on my birthday today..

Linda Alice Fowler February 17, 2021 at 6:09 AM Love this one JCB. Congratulations on the win! Linda JC Brul February 17, 2021 at 6:50 AM Thank you Linda. Best regards.

Kim Rodrigues February 17, 2021 at 5:01 AM Wow, JCB! Congratulations! JC Brul February 17, 2021 at 6:50 AM Thank you Kim.

Carol Mitra February 17, 2021 at 4:55 AM And I guess we can walk over dreams....Congrats on your win :)

Vijay Pandit December 12, 2020 at 5:41 AM Poignant--awesome ending lines!

Regina Mcintosh December 12, 2020 at 4:23 AM B E A U T I F U L! I enjoyed this so much and wish you a win :) God bless you