Fragile Beauty

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More brilliantly created than any paper mache' pinata Colors bolder than a rainbow's sweeping arches of light It's a delicate symphony performing a beautiful sonata A magnificent sculpture is sweet eye candy in my sight Colors bolder than a rainbow's sweeping arches of light Blown glass balloons of a clown, twisted into curlyques A magnificent sculpture is sweet eye candy in my sight Intricately delectible is this fragile piece in glorious hues Blown glass balloons of a clown, twisted into curlyques This Chuhuly artwork spills its treasures from overhead Intricately delectible is this fragile piece in glorious hues A feast for artists whose insatiable hunger must be fed This Chuhuly artwork spills its treasures from overhead It's a delicate symphony performing a beautiful sonata A feast for artists whose insatiable hunger must be fed More brilliantly created than any paper mache' pinata ~~ July Twelfth ~ Two Thousand and Seventeen ~~

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Winged Warrior

Date: 7/12/2017 5:18:00 PM

A beautiful Pantoum Lin...you have a special way with words, that form into art...^WW^

Lin Lane
Date: 7/12/2017 6:55:00 PM

Thank you very much, ^WW^

White Wolf

Date: 7/12/2017 3:30:00 PM

Love your work, Lin! But I have a faster way: 7/12/17. Lol. And you thought I was talking about the pantoum then? Very smooth and aesthetically pleasing too.

Lin Lane
Date: 7/12/2017 3:51:00 PM

I thought you meant a faster way to blow glass. I thought I'd be a titch more artistic with the date in this one...the beauty of Dale Chuhuly almost demands it. Thanks Wolf.

Daniel Turner

Date: 7/12/2017 1:50:00 PM

Always a joy to read your poems, Lin. Exquisitely crafted much like the blown glass artwork you describe.

Lin Lane
Date: 7/12/2017 4:38:00 PM

thanks

Tim Smith

Date: 7/12/2017 11:44:00 AM

The vibrancy exhorts joy...wonderfully weaved

Lin Lane
Date: 7/12/2017 12:28:00 PM

Thank you.

Chris Green

Date: 7/12/2017 10:21:00 AM

This was wonderful Lin. So beautifully you have captured the essence of the art piece and expressed its brilliance and wonder in a fine poetic way. I have seen some of this work in Las Vegas I believe at the Bellagio. It is amazing work, just like your poem.

Lin Lane
Date: 7/12/2017 12:28:00 PM

Thank you.