Lin Lane Poet Pantoum

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Fragile Beauty

More brilliantly created than any paper mache' pinata
Colors bolder than a rainbow's sweeping arches of light
It's a delicate symphony performing a beautiful sonata
A magnificent sculpture is sweet eye candy in my sight

Colors bolder than a rainbow's sweeping arches of light
Blown glass balloons of a clown, twisted into curlyques
A magnificent sculpture is sweet eye candy in my sight
Intricately delectible is this fragile piece in glorious hues

Blown glass balloons of a clown, twisted into curlyques
This Chuhuly artwork spills its treasures from overhead
Intricately delectible is this fragile piece in glorious hues
A feast for artists whose insatiable hunger must be fed

This Chuhuly artwork spills its treasures from overhead
It's a delicate symphony performing a beautiful sonata
A feast for artists whose insatiable hunger must be fed
More brilliantly created than any paper mache' pinata


~~ July Twelfth ~ Two Thousand and Seventeen ~~

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Winged Warrior July 12, 2017 at 5:18 PM A beautiful Pantoum Lin...you have a special way with words, that form into art...^WW^ Lin Lane July 12, 2017 at 6:55 PM Thank you very much, ^WW^

White Wolf July 12, 2017 at 3:30 PM Love your work, Lin! But I have a faster way: 7/12/17. Lol. And you thought I was talking about the pantoum then? Very smooth and aesthetically pleasing too. Lin Lane July 12, 2017 at 3:51 PM I thought you meant a faster way to blow glass. I thought I'd be a titch more artistic with the date in this one...the beauty of Dale Chuhuly almost demands it. Thanks Wolf.

Daniel Turner July 12, 2017 at 1:50 PM Always a joy to read your poems, Lin. Exquisitely crafted much like the blown glass artwork you describe. Lin Lane July 12, 2017 at 4:38 PM thanks

Tim Smith July 12, 2017 at 11:44 AM The vibrancy exhorts joy...wonderfully weaved Lin Lane July 12, 2017 at 12:28 PM Thank you.

Chris Green July 12, 2017 at 10:21 AM This was wonderful Lin. So beautifully you have captured the essence of the art piece and expressed its brilliance and wonder in a fine poetic way. I have seen some of this work in Las Vegas I believe at the Bellagio. It is amazing work, just like your poem. Lin Lane July 12, 2017 at 12:28 PM Thank you.