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Fractals In Time

leafless trees appear fractures on the horizon of a space-time scene

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 8/22/2018 9:34:00 PM
Love the poem, and esp loved the title, SB. A very upper-case state of mind. Elevated grace of the third-day kind. Such a cool breeze poem wafting from your apple blossom fragrant pen. Aurora bright write. Love and more love always.
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Date: 8/20/2018 11:43:00 PM
I'm a tree hugger too, my friend...timeless echoes thru space-time mist...love & trees...^WW^
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Sand Blown
Date: 8/21/2018 1:05:00 AM
bit of a correction: "a" timelessness echoes in time-space not in or of space-time...for year I've sketched off and on and trees are my favorite subject...when we were kids you'd climb a tree for peace and sanctuary ...chestnut trees, oaks, maples...
Date: 8/20/2018 3:32:00 PM
Sci-fi! I like this image!
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Date: 8/20/2018 8:29:00 PM
thanks...scifi or nova, either sounds like a write...it'll be fall soon and the trees will be bare : )
Date: 8/20/2018 12:55:00 AM
Liked this!
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Sand Blown
Date: 8/20/2018 12:36:00 PM
i love trees (maybe i was a tree in another life...no idea)
Date: 8/19/2018 8:08:00 PM
A well-written haiku; I always appreciate the 5-7-5 meter. I am really liking the term "space time scene."
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Date: 8/19/2018 8:42:00 PM
haikus are fun...andt... time-space is the truth...behind any space-time scene ...time is all we have
Date: 8/19/2018 7:57:00 PM
Nice Haiku..great imagery
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Sand Blown
Date: 8/19/2018 8:35:00 PM
thanks...trees are a camera focus for me

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