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Fractally

I see it in the universe. I see it in a leaf, Patterns in a rivers course Designs beyond belief. I see it in my veins I see it in a tree. Random patterns reign But most I cannot see. I see design at every level I see a Maker’s hand. And in His work, I revel As it cycles and expands. I see a sea of people I see a blinded throng Like the tulip’s tepal Looking inward for too long.

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Date: 7/22/2024 4:00:00 AM
I like the rhythm, rhyme and flow of this one. I like the spiritual touch. Yes, God is a God of design, and He made His designs to be pleasing to man's senses. Thanks for sharing this one with us. Sara K
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Tom Valles
Date: 7/22/2024 11:10:00 AM
Sara, I appreciate your comments very much! There are wondrous designs all around us. Thanks for the wonderful poems you share with us, I feel dwarfed by your talent!
Date: 7/10/2024 5:08:00 PM
...nice write...all nature's geometrics (lightening, ice, plants, animals, etc ..) be stunning....all be as times change-fracture cracks......stan sand....
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Date: 7/12/2024 9:17:00 AM
Sand Blown, thank you for your comments. Nature's geometrics are stunning indeed, and scale is no barrier from the microscopic to infinite.
Date: 7/10/2024 3:13:00 PM
Beautiful writing etching the equator of the maple tree comes to mind many blessings
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Tom Valles
Date: 7/10/2024 3:25:00 PM
Yolanda, I appreciate so much your kind comments. Blessings to you.

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