Fractal

Falling from the sky, snow Flow to the sea, rivers Found underground, crystal Faint, far glow, galaxy Fraught with geometry’s Fathomless gyrations Forming life’s fair patterns 9/23/16

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Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 7/12/2018 2:33:00 PM

This poem is so lovely and inspirational Tom. Belated Congratulations my friend! : )

FJ Thomas

Date: 3/7/2018 12:13:00 AM

I too enjoy the beauty of fractals. Beautiful write Tom :)

Len Gasun

Date: 10/7/2016 2:07:00 AM

This is such brilliant composition my dear friend, Tom. And the ending is great! Many congrats ( belated) on your fine win! Cheers! love and hugs, Leonora

Paul Callus

Date: 9/30/2016 4:20:00 PM

Very creative, Tom. A repeating pattern flowing along these Pleiades lines! Congrats on your win! Regards // paul

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/27/2016 3:03:00 AM

- Tom, congratulations on your great wins poems - I do not participate often in contest, but this I like very much - A challenge like a puzzle .... not easy ... but Pleiades poems is a wonderful form - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Joseph May

Date: 9/26/2016 10:10:00 PM

Very good pleiades ....Congrats on your win

Jan Allison

Date: 9/26/2016 5:22:00 PM

this is very beautiful Tom and I love the images congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx

Tom Quigley
Date: 9/26/2016 8:43:00 PM

Thanks, Jan!

Agnes Krampe

Date: 9/26/2016 4:35:00 PM

I love this! Fractals are beautiful and intriguing, and I am thrilled to see your poem on the topic. Congrats on your win, Tom. Agnes

Tom Quigley
Date: 9/26/2016 8:44:00 PM

Thank you, Agnes!

Kim Merryman

Date: 9/26/2016 4:34:00 PM

Tom, ever since the movie "Frozen" came out I 've loved the word fractal. You did a fantastic job describing your title, smoothly and creatively! Congrats on your 2nd place win! Love, Kim

Tom Quigley
Date: 9/26/2016 8:44:00 PM

Thank you, Kim!

Barry Stebbings

Date: 9/23/2016 1:25:00 PM

Nice observation of fractals, Tom. Good luck with the contest, Barry

Tom Quigley
Date: 9/26/2016 8:44:00 PM

Thank you, Barry!