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Fox Noose

Laurence Welk's own bubble machine Blew airheads inside the pop scene So puffed up with air That they did not care A needle delivers vaccine

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Alexis Y.

Date: 4/24/2021 12:32:00 PM

Hi Rico, Good wordplay on the title Have a great day and weekend:-) Alexis

Susan Lawrence

Date: 4/22/2021 3:13:00 PM

Rico, Another magic melding of your clever wit !! FOX Noose...love it ! Susan :)

Rico Leffanta
Date: 4/23/2021 11:30:00 AM

We have not had a new poem from you in over one month; what's up? Aloha! Rico

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 4/22/2021 3:08:00 PM

Your brilliantly funny, and yes I am still wearing my birthday suit, a little wrinkled but yes, all mine, nothing fake there, lol, Have a great day , : ) keep them laughing

Ilene Bauer

Date: 4/22/2021 2:01:00 PM

i agree with jan, rico - your titles are amazingly clever, this one especially so...

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 4/22/2021 1:39:00 PM

I'm getting mine tomorrow (don't like needles, but I just look away!)

Rico Leffanta
Date: 4/23/2021 11:31:00 AM

Look away, look away, look away, Dixie cup! Aloha! Rico

Jan Allison

Date: 4/22/2021 11:59:00 AM

clever one Rico and you are a genius with the clever titles you come up with:-) to me they are as important as the body of the poem:-) hugs Jan xx

Alexis Y.
Date: 4/24/2021 12:32:00 PM

I'm not good with titles:-)

Rico Leffanta
Date: 4/23/2021 11:32:00 AM

Mahalo, Jan! Title or limerick, what counts is a laugh! Aloha! Rico