Fox Noose

Laurence Welk's own bubble machine
Blew airheads inside the pop scene
So puffed up with air
That they did not care
A needle delivers vaccine
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Y. Avatar
April 24, 2021 at 12:32 PM
Hi Rico, Good wordplay on the title Have a great day and weekend:-) Alexis
Lawrence Avatar
April 22, 2021 at 3:13 PM
Rico, Another magic melding of your clever wit !! FOX Noose...love it ! Susan :)
Leffanta Avatar
April 23, 2021 at 11:30 AM
We have not had a new poem from you in over one month; what's up? Aloha! Rico
Rose  Avatar
April 22, 2021 at 3:08 PM
Your brilliantly funny, and yes I am still wearing my birthday suit, a little wrinkled but yes, all mine, nothing fake there, lol, Have a great day , : ) keep them laughing
Bauer Avatar
April 22, 2021 at 2:01 PM
i agree with jan, rico - your titles are amazingly clever, this one especially so...
Faulkner Avatar
April 22, 2021 at 1:39 PM
I'm getting mine tomorrow (don't like needles, but I just look away!)
Leffanta Avatar
April 23, 2021 at 11:31 AM
Look away, look away, look away, Dixie cup! Aloha! Rico
Allison Avatar
April 22, 2021 at 11:59 AM
clever one Rico and you are a genius with the clever titles you come up with:-) to me they are as important as the body of the poem:-) hugs Jan xx
Y. Avatar
April 24, 2021 at 12:32 PM
I'm not good with titles:-)
Leffanta Avatar
April 23, 2021 at 11:32 AM
Mahalo, Jan! Title or limerick, what counts is a laugh! Aloha! Rico
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