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Four Winds

Minister: I watched the wind bend trees and break their stateliness and pride. With force that only God creates, Wind pushes man aside. I ought to know by now that wind, invisible to me. Can, with it’s first small breath begin a full catastrophe. Lawyer: Allegedly, I may have seen some trees collapse and fall. I’m not prepared to say, it seems, a wind has caused it all. I ought to know by now that wind, (hereafter exhibit A), is often accused of many sins. It’s M.O. looks this way. Doctor: I diagnosed the falling trees, observing in the main. A wind, or in this case a breeze, just may have caused this pain. Aorta know by now that wind, having consulted many minds, is only the first symptom of, tree failure of this kind.

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Date: 7/21/2016 3:35:00 PM
nice to see this one again, Philip..skat
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Date: 3/20/2016 11:01:00 PM
Philip, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 3/19/2016 11:35:00 PM
Philip, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 3/19/2016 2:53:00 PM
- Thank you for your first poem, Philip :) - I welcome you to Poetry Soup :) - Hope you will find our "soup" friendly and fun - Good luck :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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