Four Walls

Four walls.
Barricades.. built out of strong brick, but flimsy cement -
Strong force, but weak purpose.
It was ironic, she thought.
Society had set up four confining walls,
           and yet was an unlocked door just there.. mocking, 
                                                   beckoning those with the nerve to throw it open.
She was sure of it.
It angered her, these biased convictions.
She wasn't let to school. No work. No freedom.
And why? Why not, rather.
Simply because she was a 'she'.    

      But she would show them, she notioned.
She would show the world the suppressed would rise,
                                   and break through the boundaries preset for them.
She would show them the women of the world could revolutionize it.

She would tell them, 
      and she wouldn't stop till her voice resounded beyond the four walls of the world... 


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Dedicated to every woman reformer!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016


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Date: 4/8/2016 10:49:00 AM
Can't believe I've not read this powerful poem before Sneha and many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 4/10/2016 9:46:00 AM
Thank you so much for your support and visits, dear Jan!! :) :)
Date: 3/28/2016 3:35:00 PM
This is a lovely win, Sneha. Linda
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Date: 2/12/2017 4:28:00 AM
Thank you so much, dear Linda! I just realised I hadn't replied to this xD :)
Date: 3/25/2016 8:21:00 PM
oh goodie, I see this won in the second contest for you. Awesome and congrats.
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Date: 3/26/2016 4:50:00 AM
Thank you so much for your support, dear Andrea!! So glad you like it!! :) :)
Date: 3/23/2016 10:29:00 PM
An excellent and very inspiring poem my dear friend Sneha. Congratulations on your win! Thanks a lot for sharing! love lots and big hug, GL
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Date: 3/25/2016 3:05:00 AM
Thank you so much, dear Leonara!! Very glad you like it!! :) :)
Date: 3/21/2016 3:27:00 PM
Hi Sneha, Congratulations on your win in the "Second Chance" contest....Vlad.
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Date: 3/22/2016 9:52:00 AM
Thank you so much!! :) :)
Date: 3/20/2016 11:56:00 PM
This is both powerful, beautiful and well so very inspiring! This is an A7 in my books!
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Date: 3/21/2016 8:44:00 AM
Thank you so much for you lovely comment!! Very glad you liked it!! :) :)
Date: 3/19/2016 6:24:00 PM
This brilliant Sneha! A tribute to all women. #7ru9
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Date: 3/21/2016 8:44:00 AM
Thank you so much, dear Connie!! :) :)
Date: 3/11/2016 8:52:00 PM
sorry you were late for the contest. I truly think this one deserved a win.
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Date: 3/21/2016 8:43:00 AM
Thanks a lot, dear Andrea!! Really happy you liked it!! :) :)
Date: 3/10/2016 1:30:00 PM
Very inspiring and empowering words that all women really should read... An excellent poem, Sneha!
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Date: 3/11/2016 10:21:00 AM
Thank you so much for your lovely comment, dear Kelly!! Very glad you like it!! :) :)
Date: 3/10/2016 9:43:00 AM
I enjoyed this very much, Sineha. I believe you will push those walls back. Good luck
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Date: 3/11/2016 10:19:00 AM
Thanks a lot!! :) :)
Date: 3/8/2016 11:34:00 AM
Sneha, this is a powerful write, beautifully penned, and I am loving it 7. .
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Date: 3/8/2016 11:46:00 AM
Thank you so much for your lovely comment, dear BW!! :) :)
Date: 2/28/2016 7:19:00 PM
Sneha, this is a rousing tribute to womankind and the need for reform, particularly for education. WEll done, dearie. I do hope you were able to make it into the contest. Perhaps it closed out.
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Date: 2/29/2016 7:42:00 AM
Thanks a lot for your encouragement, dear Andrea!! Glad you liked it!! :D (I do think I was late, though.. :/)
Date: 2/28/2016 10:13:00 AM
This is excellent, Sneha! Very creative and you chose an inspiring subject to write about. May the female reformers be successful in their noble aims! gl in the contest. // paul
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Date: 2/28/2016 10:43:00 AM
Thank you so much for your inspiring comments.. Very happy you liked it!! :D :D
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