Four Walls

Four walls.
Barricades.. built out of strong brick, but flimsy cement -
Strong force, but weak purpose.
It was ironic, she thought.
Society had set up four confining walls,
           and yet was an unlocked door just there.. mocking, 
                                                   beckoning those with the nerve to throw it open.
She was sure of it.
It angered her, these biased convictions.
She wasn't let to school. No work. No freedom.
And why? Why not, rather.
Simply because she was a 'she'.    

      But she would show them, she notioned.
She would show the world the suppressed would rise,
                                   and break through the boundaries preset for them.
She would show them the women of the world could revolutionize it.

She would tell them, 
      and she wouldn't stop till her voice resounded beyond the four walls of the world... 


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Dedicated to every woman reformer!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Allison Avatar
April 8, 2016 at 10:49 AM
Can't believe I've not read this powerful poem before Sneha and many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
Rv Avatar
April 10, 2016 at 9:46 AM
Thank you so much for your support and visits, dear Jan!! :) :)
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March 28, 2016 at 3:35 PM
This is a lovely win, Sneha. Linda
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February 12, 2017 at 4:28 AM
Thank you so much, dear Linda! I just realised I hadn't replied to this xD :)
Dietrich Avatar
March 25, 2016 at 8:21 PM
oh goodie, I see this won in the second contest for you. Awesome and congrats.
Rv Avatar
March 26, 2016 at 4:50 AM
Thank you so much for your support, dear Andrea!! So glad you like it!! :) :)
Gasun Avatar
March 23, 2016 at 10:29 PM
An excellent and very inspiring poem my dear friend Sneha. Congratulations on your win! Thanks a lot for sharing! love lots and big hug, GL
Rv Avatar
March 25, 2016 at 3:05 AM
Thank you so much, dear Leonara!! Very glad you like it!! :) :)
Raven Avatar
March 21, 2016 at 3:27 PM
Hi Sneha, Congratulations on your win in the "Second Chance" contest....Vlad.
Rv Avatar
March 22, 2016 at 9:52 AM
Thank you so much!! :) :)
Vaso Avatar
March 20, 2016 at 11:56 PM
This is both powerful, beautiful and well so very inspiring! This is an A7 in my books!
Rv Avatar
March 21, 2016 at 8:44 AM
Thank you so much for you lovely comment!! Very glad you liked it!! :) :)
Marcum Wong Avatar
March 19, 2016 at 6:24 PM
This brilliant Sneha! A tribute to all women. #7ru9
Rv Avatar
March 21, 2016 at 8:44 AM
Thank you so much, dear Connie!! :) :)
Dietrich Avatar
March 11, 2016 at 8:52 PM
sorry you were late for the contest. I truly think this one deserved a win.
Rv Avatar
March 21, 2016 at 8:43 AM
Thanks a lot, dear Andrea!! Really happy you liked it!! :) :)
Deschler Avatar
March 10, 2016 at 1:30 PM
Very inspiring and empowering words that all women really should read... An excellent poem, Sneha!
Rv Avatar
March 11, 2016 at 10:21 AM
Thank you so much for your lovely comment, dear Kelly!! Very glad you like it!! :) :)
Kroll Avatar
March 10, 2016 at 9:43 AM
I enjoyed this very much, Sineha. I believe you will push those walls back. Good luck
Rv Avatar
March 11, 2016 at 10:19 AM
Thanks a lot!! :) :)
La France Avatar
March 8, 2016 at 11:34 AM
Sneha, this is a powerful write, beautifully penned, and I am loving it 7. .
Rv Avatar
March 8, 2016 at 11:46 AM
Thank you so much for your lovely comment, dear BW!! :) :)
Dietrich Avatar
February 28, 2016 at 7:19 PM
Sneha, this is a rousing tribute to womankind and the need for reform, particularly for education. WEll done, dearie. I do hope you were able to make it into the contest. Perhaps it closed out.
Rv Avatar
February 29, 2016 at 7:42 AM
Thanks a lot for your encouragement, dear Andrea!! Glad you liked it!! :D (I do think I was late, though.. :/)
Callus Avatar
February 28, 2016 at 10:13 AM
This is excellent, Sneha! Very creative and you chose an inspiring subject to write about. May the female reformers be successful in their noble aims! gl in the contest. // paul
Rv Avatar
February 28, 2016 at 10:43 AM
Thank you so much for your inspiring comments.. Very happy you liked it!! :D :D
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