Kim Rodrigues Poet Kimo

Four Square-kimo and reverse

Four Square

electrostatic dimming of sunlight
mellisonant quickening 
lightning playing four square
study quadrants on screen
kingdom come of a rainstorm
that merely whispers an awakening

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Bill Baker July 9, 2025 at 8:58 PM You killed this one, Kim. Fine Kimo! Your poet friend in Texas, Bill Kim Rodrigues July 10, 2025 at 4:15 AM Thank you, Bill! I appreciate it! Keep writing!

Heidi Sands July 9, 2025 at 7:44 AM Good one Kim. It is worth reading more than once. Have a nice day :) Kim Rodrigues July 9, 2025 at 7:52 AM I appreciate you saying so! Thank you, Heidi!

Gershon Wolf July 8, 2025 at 8:36 PM 'melisonant' - now pleasing to the eye as well as to the ear. Thanks, Kim. Kim Rodrigues July 9, 2025 at 7:52 AM Who doesn’t like a good rainstorm! Hugs

Joseph P. DiMino July 8, 2025 at 3:15 PM Ah, awakening indeed. Now for some wine, and a good old Rodger Corman flick. Vincent Price the host. Kim Rodrigues July 8, 2025 at 4:43 PM You made me laugh…Vincent Price!

Paige Hind July 8, 2025 at 3:08 PM This moves through you, like lightning does without touching. Beautiful, Kim. :) Kim Rodrigues July 8, 2025 at 3:10 PM Thank you, Paige!

Hilda Greenhough July 8, 2025 at 2:25 PM I sense the turbulence. You brought a storm too life with your powerful words. Kim Rodrigues July 8, 2025 at 3:10 PM Thank you, Hilda!