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Four Cafes

I was off for my vacation. After a long flight and drive, I reached my cozy apartment. Stars like diamonds filled the cold January night. Exhausted I sank into my soft bed and fall fast asleep. A red roaster was my alarm clock. From my apartment window, three flight’s up, I looked down to the right. Grape vines stood as guards running up the mountainside. To the left, in the bright sunlight was a cute town with four cafe signs. The day turned into night and dinner time. The “Wine Café” was my first stop. Free wine with my wonderful home-cooked meal. My second stop was “Pierre's Café.” The music and dancers were lively as they taught me how to dance. Walking to the third cafe, I wondered why I had picked this cold month for my trip. The “Little Café” was filled with laughter. "Special," two drinks for the price of one. Hooray, I said. It was getting late but I must try the fourth cafe, the “Father and Sons Cafe.” A roaring fireplace with stories being told. My diary ended with, a trip of a lifetime.   Date Written: 2/18/2023

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Date: 2/20/2023 6:07:00 PM
Fabulous work of art, Paula. Best wishes :)
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 3/2/2023 8:47:00 AM
Thanks for your note and for your best wishes. Glad you enjoyed my trip. Have a blessed/wonderful day.
Date: 2/20/2023 11:47:00 AM
Creative lines for the contest. Reads like a good contender to me. Way to go. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 3/2/2023 8:46:00 AM
Thanks for your note. Glad you enjoyed my fun trip/write. Have a blessed/wonderful day.
Date: 2/20/2023 9:28:00 AM
ahhh the envy you bring to the surface...wish i was there....you make me long to run away and join the circus...loved it
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 3/2/2023 8:45:00 AM
Thanks for your note. Glad you enjoyed my trip. A writer can make their trip be what they want to to be. Next time I will take a trip to the circus for my vacation. Have a blessed/wonderful day.
Date: 2/20/2023 5:28:00 AM
Sounds like you picked a perfect holiday destination that you might re-visit or just write about it and describe your vacation to us, which you did. HOLIDAY OF A LIFETIME - HOORAY Hugs and Blessings, Jennifer.
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 3/2/2023 8:43:00 AM
Thanks for your note. Glad you enjoyed my wonderful trip. A writer can make what they want to to be. Hooray!!! Have a blessed/wonderful day.
Date: 2/18/2023 7:37:00 PM
Reading this was a wonderful trip for the reader Paula, most enjoyable… Belle
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 2/19/2023 10:48:00 AM
Thanks for your note. Glad you enjoyed my trip. Have a blessed/wonderful day.
Date: 2/18/2023 4:13:00 PM
I felt I was with you. Sign of a good poem You bet 0@nagiotz
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 2/19/2023 10:45:00 AM
Thanks for your note. Glad you enjoyed the trip with me. Have a blessed/wonderful day.
Date: 2/18/2023 3:29:00 PM
Very nicely penned prose, Paula. Your imagery is of top quality. Good luck with the contest
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 2/19/2023 10:44:00 AM
Thanks for your note, good luck and kind words. You made my day. Have a blessed/wonderful day.

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