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With the sun in my eyes, I grab my sunglasses and go I go off in the world. Wondering where life will take me next. Not knowing drives me insane. However, I take the pain. I spot a destination, and decide to go move forward. I end up on a sandy beach. Putting on sunblock makes me wonder how hot the sun really is on this day. So I then take out my phone. Looking on the weather app, and soon realize it is 90 degrees! Today… I realize that when I open my eyes and really look, there is so much more than just a destination. There is a journey.

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Date: 12/20/2016 3:52:00 PM

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