Poet Destroyer A Poet Couplet

Found At Last

FOUND AT LAST
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Heading into the light of the infinity mass.
Thrills over a new breath, a shining smile made out of brass 

Wondering if my energy will ever dissolve?
A slipknot tied on the world where we revolve.

Sublime in to a new kind of contrast.
A fate ending better than worse, no longer an outcast.

Appearing with TRONS no one solves.
Beyond and under where life really evolves.

Once death takes a toll real love will be found at last.
An afterlife so profound waiting~alas~alas!

By:P.D.

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Skat A February 4, 2016 at 11:19 PM so cute **SKAT**

Andrea Dietrich May 16, 2014 at 9:55 PM PD, I tried to reply to your soupmails and this message came up: Soupmail access is restricted by this poet. What did you do? Did you tell Soup not to give you Soupmail? is soupmail maybe related to the comments to comments thing? Please let me know. I think you might be able to soupmail me but I can't reply to it.

Andrea Dietrich October 23, 2013 at 9:16 PM Looking this one over again, PD. I admire you putting up the pink bow avatar to support the work for finding a breast cancer cure!

Robin Davis October 14, 2013 at 4:51 PM My poetry friend This is very intriguing and powerful Filled with an emotional need to find yourself and someone to love you, Nice job

Gary Fields August 11, 2011 at 2:22 PM Ms. Poet Destroyer, you have come so far, and yet, you get even better! Kiss, Kiss-up! Ha.....Ha. This is a good write. So, keep the write-up,up. Check out my poem EX-GIRLFRIEND REVISITED.... you might like! Your friend in and under the pen/G.FIELDS

Gary Fields August 7, 2011 at 2:04 PM What is up XDESTROYER MS, POET, so you have a rhyme now, huh! Nicely constructed and full of cheer. Yes, you have changed. Now get to the Loss Lost Love part! Csn you handle that, you dirty two timer. So, you have been collaborating around, huh. Now I feel so used. Oh, well! Exceptional job and almost perfectly flawless.....Keep the write-ups, up! Your friend in the pen/G.FIELDS

Sarah Seraphin May 21, 2011 at 10:45 AM * “Ow * There Your Beauty Is * My Dear Beautiful & Sweeet LeeAnn. * I Knew That I Would Find Your Splendour Sooner or Later * If It Were I That Searched Far & Wide * Smile * Only To Discover But Another Spectacular Jewel * Adorning This Crown of Your Beauties Poetic Brilliance * Sooo Fascinating Is Your Magical Wand * Spellbound In Beauty * A Fave Cherry Topped. Amid The Final Verse * Waiting For Utopias Sweeetened Birth * Hugs & Kisses * Kisses & Hugs * With Lips of Luv * Sarah” *

Wilma Neels May 1, 2011 at 10:54 AM Hey Pd, strange that I would choose this one to read after reading your comment about not sure if you are open to love yourself or other people loving you. somehow I don't think we have any control over that. It just happens.. life kinda plays those kind of tricks on us. One thing I know for sure is that you are loved.. Whether you want it or not. That is what friendship entails :) hope I at least made you smile today.. Thank you for always dropping in on me :) TC crazy me

Wiseton Prins March 24, 2011 at 11:01 AM Hey P.D... my heart suspects u're Linda Marie... i dont know why... but it seems as though u two are the same... coz again ur name is Linda... and i saw somwhere the initials LMsomething... and then you two are BFF... and then u dont post ur poems frequently... could i be having a credible hunch here? ...it would be interesting... has my mouth agape with happy anticipation...>thanx Linda for ur warm comments on my Kaleidoscope... always feel so appreciated when u comment... thanx-a-lovely-heart!

Debbie Guzzi January 31, 2011 at 3:33 PM The first 3 couplets are so mature and profound! I just want you to have true love while ALIVE!! BIG HUGS! Light & Love

John Loving Iii December 27, 2010 at 5:56 PM sometimes it the short pieces that say the most. alas alas john

Robert A. Dufresne December 26, 2010 at 2:59 PM I hear you PD. I just wrote one today on the back of a box on the way to work ending in much the same way about true love in eternity. Thanks for sharing!

Kabuteng P.Ink K. December 22, 2010 at 9:42 AM Thanks for dropping by my poems pd :) sure do appreciate it & hmm as for that finality write-- could very well be that you passed by my mind as I wrote that ;) well I hope everything is better for you -- catch you when I can, ok? Have a wonderful Christmas!! & thank you again :) off to lala land I go and to the land of gift wrappers-- lol --hugs-- nikko :) ps -- thanks for dropping by my blog ^_^

Margeret Bailey December 14, 2010 at 6:44 PM Nice write!

John Loving Iii December 7, 2010 at 5:38 AM real love will be found at last. as in how i express it in my poetry of late.john

Dana Smith December 4, 2010 at 1:48 PM I really enjoyed this one.. looking forward to reading more of your work... Dana'lynn

Don Johnson November 25, 2010 at 2:14 AM thank you 4 your kind comment lightening bolt should i lament....perhaps whimsy mate ... This verse is deep the journey long the longest sleep the sweetest song....we go on babe

Matthew Anish November 24, 2010 at 2:27 PM Hope you are right about the afterlife, Intresting work! Love Matthew Anish

Jennifer Arnott November 24, 2010 at 7:16 AM thanks :) , i enjoyed reading your poems, Jen

Anna-Marie Docherty November 23, 2010 at 12:15 AM Infinity and the promise of better things to come. A place for all in peace. Great write, deep meaning. Well done. Kindest thoughts, Anna-Marie.

Ravindra K Kapoor November 22, 2010 at 7:56 AM Brilliant piece of creative writing my friend. Your Poem FOUND AT LAST is a Gem of a write. Hindus believe that death is only a phase of changing of the body which becomes like worn-out clothes, because of aging. Soul is immortal and it keeps changing shapes from one body to another like we all change our clothes. Your last lines reveal a new hope for a better life with Love. A very promising Poem you have masterfully crafted with a thought provoking theme. Love & best wishes..Ravindra..PD

Phil Boy November 21, 2010 at 10:53 AM ALAS :) P.J.

Nette Onclaud November 20, 2010 at 10:46 AM this gem oozes with gentle myetry and longing, PD! i miss your poems, got MORE?? thanks for appreciating my pensee... worth a try doing one but it can be very contagious..lol ...warmest, nette

Audrey Castaneda November 19, 2010 at 6:57 PM Nice poem' audree

John Freeman November 19, 2010 at 6:21 PM Great job on your couplet DP. Yep, death will have to take a heavy toll before mission accomplished. Agape, Moses

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