Found and Lost

I needed someone to talk to 
   and found only myself
I had a moment of thought too
    but I kept it to myself
I wanted that uplifting praise
   and found it in myself
I gave everything in many ways
   but left nothing for myself.

Am I selfish for being selfless
Am I heartless for being a hard mess

This is not easy
This is not fun
This was supposed to last
This was supposed to be the one

The clock is not on my side
The hands are ticking with pride
The explosion is at its peak
The damage is showing as I speak

I gave everything in many ways
   and lost more than just myself
I wanted that uplifting praise
   and with it I ruined myself
I had a moment of thought too
    but I didn't keep it to myself
I needed someone to talk to 
   and I couldn't even hear myself.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016


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Date: 2/5/2016 12:21:00 PM
in these words I found what will make the lost feel astound because of the many mended frowns who will Love the sound that no matter what, hope is still around because to acknowledge is to no longer be bound....wonderful write my friend....;)
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Date: 2/1/2016 8:02:00 PM
So beautiful Lisanne..
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Lisanne Hassen
Date: 2/1/2016 9:20:00 PM
Thanks hun, I appreciate it. <3
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