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Foul Play

The year is ending Let it gently close The feeling of defeat and loss Violently expand and implode The true nature of people Finally exposed The power of deception That with damage explode The fears of what’s coming By day they grow The disbelief in reality And what we really know The judgement of God Does this event show Where will this leave us Where violent winds blow Is it too late to repent Their wicked deeds It’s time for mending While souls to God plead The year is ending Please, please dear God give us what we need

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Date: 1/28/2025 8:32:00 PM
Amen. Lovely finishing line to this thought provoking poem. Hope your year is off to a good start.
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Date: 12/31/2024 10:49:00 AM
My prayer too .please Lord , give us what we need
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Date: 12/31/2024 10:06:00 AM
You're a natural poet in a natural world, John. It's all about one's human nature. The new year is here, soon midnight shall usher in 2025, Happy New Year!!
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